Notice Me

Notice Me

Mia was the most nociable girl in Adeki high. After all, who wouldnt be interested in her? All of the students, and even a few teachers, were interested. All, save, for Sesa. (Short story)

published on May 22, 201759 reads 13 readers 32 completed
Chapter 1.
Ms. Popular

Ms. Popular

Mia Amito smiled at the teacher.

"Thank you, Ms. Kiro. Have a wonderful day!" She said, walking out of the classroom and getting all the attention.
She smiled to herself.
She loved, loved, loved being the center of attention of everything.

All the boys, and even a few girls, stared at her with lust, and why not?
She was smart, tall, athletic, and, lets face it, hot.
I mean, come on!
She was the center of social life in town, and she friggin' loved it!

She bumps into a dark haired boy, then stopped in her tracks.
"Hey, watch it!" The boy says, snarling and walking away.
Her breath hitched, and she felt her heart skip a beat.

He was rude to her.
No one had ever been rude to her.

"H-hey!" She said, making the boy stop.
He turns around, then glares at her.
"Arent you supposed to say something..?" She asks, tensing up when he says, "Oh yeah! I forgot to tell you to fūck off." before he walked away.

Her eye twitched, and she felt herself scream on the inside.
No one taled to her like this.
No one!

"Hey, Mia, you ok?" Mac asked, gently tugging her arm.
She smiled, making Mac melt.
"Im ok." She says, smiling to herself as she planed on making him apologize. "Juuuust fine..."
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Comments (32)

The_Mad_Hatress
I love Yandere stories!
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on October 08, 2017
TylerWay
Woah!! Unexpected!
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TylerWay
Lol XD, but true
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Smug look*
Thats why Im the one, the only,
Motherfuggin Emo King!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
NNNNNNNNOOOO SESA DON'R FALL ASLEEP!!!
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TylerWay
Oh the evil laugh.....
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TylerWay
Good bye Shiki-kan!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Ikr?
Im about to go to lunch. See ya then!
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
I thank thee, for the story. Inspiration. It can happen any time.
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Meh. Ill be buisy all week, so I thought,
'Dude, why not say screw it and write just one more?'
Then boom, Notice Me twas born.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Ans it was a great story
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yep
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
There. A 5-chapter love story
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
And I will try to come read them!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
I know. Ill try to write this summer if I can.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yay. Man, I'm going to miss your stories
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Heheheh soon my friend soon.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Not as crazy as the others. I want to see her level of craziness
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Just wait. She's not as crazy as the others, but she still crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Mia is dangerous
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TylerWay
Yep. Sesa is going to get beat..
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TylerWay
Get killed? 0_o Woah
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Or worse...
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Someones in for iiit...
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Some ones in for it...
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Love is strange
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup. Wait till Valintines day
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TylerWay
Valentines Day...Everything get's crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
This time the girl is the popular one!
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on May 22, 2017