Notice Me

Notice Me

Mia was the most nociable girl in Adeki high. After all, who wouldnt be interested in her? All of the students, and even a few teachers, were interested. All, save, for Sesa. (Short story)

published on May 22, 201769 reads 16 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 4.
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Mia sharpened her kitchen knife, smiling into it.

"He will be mine. He will notice me." She said, singing as she layed the knife next to the poison. "Just wait. He'll notice me."

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Sesa sighed as he looked at the mail.
Bill, bill, bill, junk mail, junk mail, pink letter-
Wait, pink letter?
Since when..?

He opened the letter, reading its contents.

Sesa Sesa, open the door.

Just then, there was a loud and persistent knock at the door, making him jump.

Sesa Sesa, call me a whore.

The banging got louder, and the driving rain kept pouring. He slowly, ever so slowly reached for the door, looking at the paper again as he opened it.

Sesa Sesa, fight me no more.

Mia stood there in the rain, soaked to the bone and in a black hoodie.

"Hello, Sesa." She said, smiling and stepping inside. "Our house is quite lovely."
He scowled.
"Mia, get out. This isnt 'Our' house. Its mine." He replied, not closing the door behind him. "Now get-"

She slammed into him, ripping out a knife and holding it to his throat.
"Tch. Typical boy." She said, holding it so close to his throat that when he gulped, it kindly knicked him. "Always trying to tell the girl what to do."

He snarled, then gritted out, "What do you want, Mia?"
She smiled, put the knife down, then said, "You."
"Me?"
"Yes. You." She replied, smiling and kissing the bead of blood.
"Mmm... You taste amazing." She said, licking the little amount of blood away.

He gulped.
This girl was a freak!
"Leave me al-"
"No!" She screamed, the lightening crackling in the background.

They were both silent for a moment before she quietly said, "Thats your problem. You expect people to leave you alone. But not me. Never me."

Sesa sighed, then closed the door behind him.
"I cant send you home in the rain. Come morning, you leave." He said, walking to the couch and flopping down.

She smiled, then layed on top of him and smiled.
"Deal." She said, getting a sigh from him as he slowly fell asleep.
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Comments (32)

The_Mad_Hatress
I love Yandere stories!
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on October 08, 2017
TylerWay
Woah!! Unexpected!
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TylerWay
Lol XD, but true
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Smug look*
Thats why Im the one, the only,
Motherfuggin Emo King!
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
NNNNNNNNOOOO SESA DON'R FALL ASLEEP!!!
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TylerWay
Oh the evil laugh.....
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TylerWay
Good bye Shiki-kan!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Ikr?
Im about to go to lunch. See ya then!
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
I thank thee, for the story. Inspiration. It can happen any time.
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Meh. Ill be buisy all week, so I thought,
'Dude, why not say screw it and write just one more?'
Then boom, Notice Me twas born.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Ans it was a great story
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yep
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
There. A 5-chapter love story
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
And I will try to come read them!
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
I know. Ill try to write this summer if I can.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Yay. Man, I'm going to miss your stories
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Heheheh soon my friend soon.
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Not as crazy as the others. I want to see her level of craziness
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Just wait. She's not as crazy as the others, but she still crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Mia is dangerous
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TylerWay
Yep. Sesa is going to get beat..
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TylerWay
Get killed? 0_o Woah
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Or worse...
;)
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Someones in for iiit...
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on May 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sing-songy*
Some ones in for it...
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
Love is strange
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yup. Wait till Valintines day
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TylerWay
Valentines Day...Everything get's crazy
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on May 22, 2017
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on May 22, 2017
TylerWay
This time the girl is the popular one!
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on May 22, 2017