All that remains

All that remains

This is a story about a teenage boy, who falls hard for a girl, his friends try to tell him she is bad news, but he won't listen. will he find out what they are talking about before it is too late?

published on May 21, 201443 reads 13 readers 24 completed
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Chapter 2.

What goes up must come down

So I had been talking to Tiffany for about 4 months, I figured it was time to make a serious move, so that night I messaged her saying that I thought I had a crush on her, etc... she replied saying that while she saw me as a friend, that was all. I felt devestated, she had become a part of my life, I loved her, and yet she did not feel the same, no matter, it may have just been a matter of time, so I tried to give her some space. There was another guy that I knew she talked to, his name was nick, Nick Harrison. Nick was a big guy, not big as in fat, so much as in big as in just tall and built like a football player. He seemed to enjoy talking to her, I knew in my mind that he wanted her too, I couldn't just let her go, plus Jack was a good friend of Nick's. So I had started talking to Tiffany  at home via messaging:

You: hey,Tiffany :)

Tiffany: Hi

You: so, wazzup?

Tiffany: nm, been talking to Jack Fritz, u?

You:...I gtg, I think I heard the doorbell...

After having messaged her for maybe a minute, I already felt kinda depressed after having learned that she liked Jack, but I was still firm with what I felt, I knew, in my heart, that I loved her more than he ever would. So the next day at school was kinda awkward, but I managed to talk to her a little, but all day I felt as if I was on the verge of having an emotional breakdown. I then wrote her a poem and called it "Sorry Doesn't" :

Sorry doesn't mend my broken heart
sorry doesn't heal my wrist full of marks
sorry doesn't give back the joy I had
sorry doesn't make me any less sad
sorry doesn't give back the friend I lost over you
sorry doesn't take the pain I’m going through
sorry doesn't put back the tears I shed
sorry doesn't rid me of the thoughts in my head

She seemed to like it, but I could tell by her body language that she was kinda worried about me, I lied and told her I was fine to keep from worrying her too much, I knew that the only reason she was worried was that she didn't want to feel the guilt she was feeling for breaking my heart, although now I look back and see that that was just the beginning.
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RoseHeart
I think that I would be as oblivious to his feelings as Tiffany and that bothers me but I wouldn't dump him if he is a nice guy. I have a crush on a guy who I do know but lives across the country and I wouldn't have to deal with that choice probably
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on July 13, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I understand. Going through that is rough. But you can't let that control your life. Don't ever think you can't get someone who is beautiful. I know you've been hurt and I'm sure it will take a while but everyone gets that beautiful person and looks aren't everything. Personality makes a person. I've met hot guys and they hav been jerks. Just have faith you can See More▼
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on June 01, 2014
rocklord
thing is,dark angel, is that something changed my emotional stability when the events of this story happened, and what I mean by that is that if I am at say, Walmart, and I walk past a really pretty girl, my heart just sinks, like I feel attraction, but at the same time, I know that there is no way in hell I could score a pretty girl like that, then it becomes See More▼
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RoseHeart
In Greek mythology people who are soul mates were connected together until an angry god tore them apart so with that I am saying that you will find your other half
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on July 13, 2014
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on June 01, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Maybe your not talking to the right girls. Don't say your just to remain alone. That's not a good life to live! She is out there
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on May 31, 2014
rocklord
I hear that, but yet I see no evidence, every girl I talk to either hates me and thinks im a creep, or if they do date me it does'nt end well :( honestly I just as well remain alone
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on May 31, 2014
DarkAngel1204
You will! :) there's a match out there for everyone
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on May 31, 2014
rocklord
yeah...maybe... :(
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on May 31, 2014
DarkAngel1204
It will get better but hey! U don't know one day someone might return the favor of love one day :)
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on May 27, 2014
rocklord
well, its been a year ago that all of what happened in the story took place for me, and to this day I still can't help but fall in love very easily...
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on May 27, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Actually no. You can fill the hole. There are tons of fish in the sea as the saying goes. If you stay on one person, the life gets horrible and you never realize how beautiful the world can be
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
it actually makes it worse when it is ripped away, because you fall in love easier, even with celebrities, because we try to fill the whole left by that person, unfortunately the only one who can fix the whole is the same one who made it...
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
You are absolutely right. People do crazy things for love, but it is a beautiful emotion to feel..until it is ripped away. Everything comes with a price sometimes. Just gotta hope it will all be different one day
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
true, and what people don't consider is that when they do that to someone, they are not just breaking their heart, they are crushing everything they have done to be with that person...
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yeah most of the time we never realize how bad something is until we experience it ourselves. It is a painful thing, but a good chance to learn
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
see when you have been through something that pushed you to the edge, you learn alot about people who at one point seemed lower than you, then you realize, that shit can happen to you too.
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
That's a good way to put it. I admire how you see it
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on May 25, 2014
rocklord
it happens,I'll never be able to forget it, because up to that point I had thought suicidal people were stupid, I was wrong, they are desperate to find peace in their hearts, rather than to be tormented by the emotional pain.
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on May 25, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I've noticed. I am sorry that happened to you though
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on May 23, 2014
rocklord
yeah...the best stories come from deep in your heart.
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on May 23, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Oh well u did a magnificent story!
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on May 22, 2014
rocklord
yes, but I changed the names so I wouldn't get in trouble. My real name is not george
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rain_28
What is your real name/
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on July 01, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Wow I loved that. Great work! Just wondering if this is a true story?
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on May 22, 2014