All that remains

All that remains

This is a story about a teenage boy, who falls hard for a girl, his friends try to tell him she is bad news, but he won't listen. will he find out what they are talking about before it is too late?

published on May 21, 201443 reads 13 readers 24 completed
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Chapter 3.

R.I.P Died of a Broken heart

Thanks Giving rolled around and I had her over the day after thanksgiving, we watched movies in the upstairs of my house, I had my arm around her, but she would always scoot away from me to the other side of the Sofa, I then had her over again about 3 weeks later, everything seemed to be looking up despite her not liking me, I still decided I should try to give her some time, as little as she talked to Nick, I figured maybe I still have a chance, I should have given up there and moved on, but I was too damn stubborn.

December Rolled around and it was getting close to christmas, so I had by this point been talking to her for about 5 months and I knew by this point that I was head over heals in love with her. There was only one problem, she had told me of her crush on Jack, and I knew that Jack had recently been dumped, so I knew I had to act fast, so in a desperate attempt to keep her from him, I Manipulated her into dating me, so we dated for about 2 weeks. On january 1st of 2013 I got a message:

Tiffany: hey, look, I need to call you,I have something to tell you...

you: um,ok, is it good or bad?

Tiffany: I don't think i'm at liberty to say...

you: ok...

She Called me, and told me that Jack had asked her out, He was not aware of the fact that I was dating her because I was afraid that if he found out he would tell Nick, and I did not want to fight Nick, so I had told Tiffany to keep quiet about it. So she told me that she really liked Jack and all the things he has done for her,and all this bullcrap that he was nice to her, I saw how he treated her and how he looked at her, he pushed her around ( sometimes literally) and I knew all he wanted to do was have sex with her,but there was no convincing her otherwise.
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RoseHeart
I think that I would be as oblivious to his feelings as Tiffany and that bothers me but I wouldn't dump him if he is a nice guy. I have a crush on a guy who I do know but lives across the country and I wouldn't have to deal with that choice probably
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on July 13, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I understand. Going through that is rough. But you can't let that control your life. Don't ever think you can't get someone who is beautiful. I know you've been hurt and I'm sure it will take a while but everyone gets that beautiful person and looks aren't everything. Personality makes a person. I've met hot guys and they hav been jerks. Just have faith you can See More▼
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on June 01, 2014
rocklord
thing is,dark angel, is that something changed my emotional stability when the events of this story happened, and what I mean by that is that if I am at say, Walmart, and I walk past a really pretty girl, my heart just sinks, like I feel attraction, but at the same time, I know that there is no way in hell I could score a pretty girl like that, then it becomes See More▼
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RoseHeart
In Greek mythology people who are soul mates were connected together until an angry god tore them apart so with that I am saying that you will find your other half
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on July 13, 2014
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on June 01, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Maybe your not talking to the right girls. Don't say your just to remain alone. That's not a good life to live! She is out there
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on May 31, 2014
rocklord
I hear that, but yet I see no evidence, every girl I talk to either hates me and thinks im a creep, or if they do date me it does'nt end well :( honestly I just as well remain alone
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on May 31, 2014
DarkAngel1204
You will! :) there's a match out there for everyone
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on May 31, 2014
rocklord
yeah...maybe... :(
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on May 31, 2014
DarkAngel1204
It will get better but hey! U don't know one day someone might return the favor of love one day :)
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on May 27, 2014
rocklord
well, its been a year ago that all of what happened in the story took place for me, and to this day I still can't help but fall in love very easily...
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on May 27, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Actually no. You can fill the hole. There are tons of fish in the sea as the saying goes. If you stay on one person, the life gets horrible and you never realize how beautiful the world can be
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
it actually makes it worse when it is ripped away, because you fall in love easier, even with celebrities, because we try to fill the whole left by that person, unfortunately the only one who can fix the whole is the same one who made it...
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
You are absolutely right. People do crazy things for love, but it is a beautiful emotion to feel..until it is ripped away. Everything comes with a price sometimes. Just gotta hope it will all be different one day
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
true, and what people don't consider is that when they do that to someone, they are not just breaking their heart, they are crushing everything they have done to be with that person...
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yeah most of the time we never realize how bad something is until we experience it ourselves. It is a painful thing, but a good chance to learn
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
see when you have been through something that pushed you to the edge, you learn alot about people who at one point seemed lower than you, then you realize, that shit can happen to you too.
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
That's a good way to put it. I admire how you see it
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on May 25, 2014
rocklord
it happens,I'll never be able to forget it, because up to that point I had thought suicidal people were stupid, I was wrong, they are desperate to find peace in their hearts, rather than to be tormented by the emotional pain.
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on May 25, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I've noticed. I am sorry that happened to you though
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on May 23, 2014
rocklord
yeah...the best stories come from deep in your heart.
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on May 23, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Oh well u did a magnificent story!
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on May 22, 2014
rocklord
yes, but I changed the names so I wouldn't get in trouble. My real name is not george
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rain_28
What is your real name/
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on July 01, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Wow I loved that. Great work! Just wondering if this is a true story?
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on May 22, 2014