All that remains

All that remains

This is a story about a teenage boy, who falls hard for a girl, his friends try to tell him she is bad news, but he won't listen. will he find out what they are talking about before it is too late?

published on May 21, 201439 reads 12 readers 24 completed
Chapter 1.

The new girl

Hello, my name is George Harold, and I am emo, how did I become emo one might ask? well, I will start with saying that I am the youngest of 2 brothers, My brother and I never had a good relationship and my parents were always too busy to talk to me anyhow, but I am getting off track here, so let me go ahead and tell you what pushed me over the edge and what left eternal scars, not just emotionally, but Physically, on my wrist, this is my story...

I remember like it was yesterday being in my Economics class and this beautiful girl wanted to sit with me, I was shy, and also taken at the time, so I talk to her, found out that her name was Tiffany Faraday.  Just seeing her made my heart want to leap out of my chest. It started with passing flirty notes, then it escalated to flirting and joking, everything was great. My girlfriend had dumped me, which I was so wrapped up in Tiffany, I didn't really care. I was way too shy to be able to flirt with her without embarrassing myself, luckily I had a friend, who was always a real player. When it came to woman, Jack fritz was my go to guy to find out what I needed to know, I had informed him of my feelings for Tiffany and he was helping me get what I wanted. Every day I came to school because I loved to see her beautiful face, he stunning good looks just entranced me. She was weird like me, quirky, blonde, and had a stunning body, oh I was in deep, I wanted her so bad that I was rejecting other girls. I thought she was the one. Everything about her was perfect, and her smile just melted my heart. She was an angel.
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RoseHeart
I think that I would be as oblivious to his feelings as Tiffany and that bothers me but I wouldn't dump him if he is a nice guy. I have a crush on a guy who I do know but lives across the country and I wouldn't have to deal with that choice probably
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on July 13, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I understand. Going through that is rough. But you can't let that control your life. Don't ever think you can't get someone who is beautiful. I know you've been hurt and I'm sure it will take a while but everyone gets that beautiful person and looks aren't everything. Personality makes a person. I've met hot guys and they hav been jerks. Just have faith you can See More▼
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on June 01, 2014
rocklord
thing is,dark angel, is that something changed my emotional stability when the events of this story happened, and what I mean by that is that if I am at say, Walmart, and I walk past a really pretty girl, my heart just sinks, like I feel attraction, but at the same time, I know that there is no way in hell I could score a pretty girl like that, then it becomes See More▼
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RoseHeart
In Greek mythology people who are soul mates were connected together until an angry god tore them apart so with that I am saying that you will find your other half
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on July 13, 2014
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on June 01, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Maybe your not talking to the right girls. Don't say your just to remain alone. That's not a good life to live! She is out there
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on May 31, 2014
rocklord
I hear that, but yet I see no evidence, every girl I talk to either hates me and thinks im a creep, or if they do date me it does'nt end well honestly I just as well remain alone
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on May 31, 2014
DarkAngel1204
You will! there's a match out there for everyone
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on May 31, 2014
rocklord
yeah...maybe...
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on May 31, 2014
DarkAngel1204
It will get better but hey! U don't know one day someone might return the favor of love one day
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on May 27, 2014
rocklord
well, its been a year ago that all of what happened in the story took place for me, and to this day I still can't help but fall in love very easily...
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on May 27, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Actually no. You can fill the hole. There are tons of fish in the sea as the saying goes. If you stay on one person, the life gets horrible and you never realize how beautiful the world can be
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
it actually makes it worse when it is ripped away, because you fall in love easier, even with celebrities, because we try to fill the whole left by that person, unfortunately the only one who can fix the whole is the same one who made it...
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
You are absolutely right. People do crazy things for love, but it is a beautiful emotion to feel..until it is ripped away. Everything comes with a price sometimes. Just gotta hope it will all be different one day
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
true, and what people don't consider is that when they do that to someone, they are not just breaking their heart, they are crushing everything they have done to be with that person...
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yeah most of the time we never realize how bad something is until we experience it ourselves. It is a painful thing, but a good chance to learn
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on May 26, 2014
rocklord
see when you have been through something that pushed you to the edge, you learn alot about people who at one point seemed lower than you, then you realize, that shit can happen to you too.
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on May 26, 2014
DarkAngel1204
That's a good way to put it. I admire how you see it
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on May 25, 2014
rocklord
it happens,I'll never be able to forget it, because up to that point I had thought suicidal people were stupid, I was wrong, they are desperate to find peace in their hearts, rather than to be tormented by the emotional pain.
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on May 25, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I've noticed. I am sorry that happened to you though
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on May 23, 2014
rocklord
yeah...the best stories come from deep in your heart.
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on May 23, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Oh well u did a magnificent story!
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on May 22, 2014
rocklord
yes, but I changed the names so I wouldn't get in trouble. My real name is not george
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rain_28
What is your real name/
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on July 01, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Wow I loved that. Great work! Just wondering if this is a true story?
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on May 22, 2014