Forget Me Not (Sapphire's end)

Forget Me Not (Sapphire's end)

A small girl who grew up with the wrong crowd, had been broken by abuse and misery was soon healed by the love of another. Ups and downs have occured in her life but each time she has been able cope and recover due to love. In her most bloody thirsty and treacherous adventure yet, Sapphire must survive till the end of her quest to set free another dimension and go home safely. Will love save her once again? Or will this be the end, of Sapphire the hedgehog. (Thank you to: everyone, I've had the time of my life here and this is my goodbye :,) I won't forget you)

published on August 12157 reads 19 readers 49 completed
Chapter 1.
Prologue

Prologue

Slarus: the dimension of trapped souls who only knew one thing, to kill. The legend goes that the god of Mobius, Danga, and the god of Slarus, Mara made an agreement to share both worlds to make peace once and for all. Danga, being the gullible god she is didn’t suspect Mara to deceive her immediately. Mara killed off most of the living in Mobius leaving Danga grieving and weak. She begged and begged Mara to stop so she could have her world back. Mara took pity on the defenceless god and instead made a deal.
“Mobians from your world will be transported here to get back to your dimension. Kind and gold hearted souls. My people won’t take pity on these beings however as I curse them to kill. For every time a Mobian dies something will be written upon them in poison. This will carry on until the mobian is no longer able to function due to the amount of poison and die for the final time. However, this may drive the being crazy making them become one of my own creations, a part of my land waiting for the next mobian to come so they too will play my game. The end of the journey will be a portal to send them back to your dimension, I want to see how powerful your creations can be!"

Grieving and weak Danga agrees and sends a sacrifice to the world of Slarus. This has happened since the start of time, yet no one has ever exited alive though the portal. This could be because of the poison, the metal break downs or due to the fact the God Mara has made the portal almost impossible for Mobians to exit alive.
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Sapphire will never be forgotten if Yamilette knew what happen she would visit Sapphire's grave and fall on her knees and start crying and growl and she would say I'll avenge you Sapphire and whoever hurt you will pay
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sapphirethehedgehog
Awwww Yami :3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Ima call him Mike XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Yeah you're gonna be the parrot XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Meaning I'm the parrot? XD and okay
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Lets do it on pm also what do you mean that you're the bird? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yay! Where are we doing it and I'm guessing I'm the bird? :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Omg yes you can start X3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Since Sapphire is already dead that means she has undone the curse so no one else will be getting the drawings :3 The others got transported there because of the curse and since it has been lifted maybe she used her dark form powers to transport there? X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem and we can do that how did the others get to Slarus? Also I'm thinking that since Yamilette will be in her dark stage I was thinking that she shouldn't have the drawings on her
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sapphirethehedgehog
Ohhh! That should be fun! Sure! but she'd have to get into Slarus somehow and thank you :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Sapphire I was thinking of doing a roleplay with you about Yamilette avenging Sapphire and fighting the parrot boy Yamilette will be in her dark stage
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Thanks I care about others also the story was sad and amazing I wished Yamilette was in it before you finished it but its okay
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ChocolatyCheese
Last chapter I found "apphire". I am wrong in saying that you meant "Sapphire"? X3 I am not a writer but just sayin
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD Yep, oops!
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The_Panda_Otaku
Welp...I'm going to go to my emo corner to grow mushrooms. This pulled at the heartstrings for sure.
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sapphirethehedgehog
^.^U sowyyyy
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Arashi_Sayaka_Blade
This was so sad...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yeahhhh ^.^U sorry
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks!!
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Arashi_Sayaka_Blade
No, it's fine! It was really well written! : D
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Lady_Artemis
*trying not to cry in front of my mother*
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sapphirethehedgehog
What did you think?? ^.^U
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yay! And yeahhhhh ^.^U hehe
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Lady_Artemis
It was brill!!!
But real sad too....
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sapphirethehedgehog
*sends a virtual hug* :3 sowy
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toughwolf3
Your leaving?!
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toughwolf3
;3
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD lol thanks!
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toughwolf3
more than ok, it kinda scared me. I thought the parrot was going to kill them.although it's good.
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sapphirethehedgehog
What did you think of the story? :3 is it okay??
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sapphirethehedgehog
Nope, just killing off Sapphire I'll still RP as her I just wanted this to be here for when I do leave, not anytime soon though ^.^
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sapphirethehedgehog
That's sweet X3 heheh
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toughwolf3
phew! thank goodness!
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XxMaria_chanxX
Maria: SAPPHYYYYY *cries*
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sowy ^.^U what did you think??
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XxMaria_chanxX
*huggles*
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sapphirethehedgehog
*hugs* XD sorry sis
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XxMaria_chanxX
*blows nose*
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sapphirethehedgehog
Okay good ^.^ didn't want to make a lot of people cry X3 hehe
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XxMaria_chanxX
*shakes head* no...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yay!!! it's not too sad is it??
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XxMaria_chanxX
I loved it!!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hope everyon enjoys! Scared to see feedback ^.^U hehe..
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Hikari_Chan
18 chapters!wow! You did a lot of hard work !
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Hikari_Chan
Ur welcome
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Hikari_Chan
Ofcourse! You will get sucess!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yep! :3 I just hope it pays off ^.^U
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