The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

One of the few to remain a Mobian, discover Jackie's side of the story before the event began, how she founded the Dauntless Mobians, and her life being the leader in a world where most people are now robots.

published on February 19, 2015not completed

Chapter 2: The Hunt Is On

I open my eyes, which is much to my amazement. I thought I would be dead, falling from such a height of seven stories high. I feel around, and my brain registers that I have safely landed onto a net. I haul myself off the net to my feet, walking forward. Whatever this place is, I think I now know it's underground.
Perfect hideout from the robots.
Taking out a torch from my pocket, I switch the light on as a guide to see where I'm walking. "Is anyone there?" I speak.
If there are survivors down here, surely they would enjoy the company of another person.
A fox of electric blue fur steps out. "Who are you?" His voice is deep, so it must be a male.
"My name is Jackie," I reply. "What are you doing down here all alone?"
"You're not a robot," he says.
I smile. "Let's just say I can resist Eggman's powers with my own."
"I'm Kyle," the fox says. "You must be a very brave girl."
"I never knew I could be this brave though."
He places his hand on my shoulder, and I try not to blush. I'm married, after all. "You can be more when you believe," he says. "I believed I could find shelter, and I found this place."
"Is there anyone else down here?" I ask him.
"No. Just me."
"We'd better turn this place into a little home."
And at that, we start straight on work.

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I finally lie on my bed in my new apartment.
Kyle and I had just finished decorating this underground area into our own hideaway from the robots. While we were at work, a few more Mobians, who were friends of mine, had fallen through the hole down here. Italy, Sky and LuLu. Between us, we became the leaders of this pack, then voted on our main leader, and I won by majority.
We all knew we would seen have to venture back out into the world to find more Mobians able to resist the waves set by Eggman.
The next day, we pack our bags and rise above the ground. Splitting off into 5 different areas, I prepare myself for the danger ahead.
The five of us do have new technology in our watches. Thanks to Tails, at a time before this, of course, our watches now have installed communicators, should we ever need to contact each other.
I see an orchid cat in the distance. "Who are you?" I say.
She turns round, shocked. "My... My name is Lilac," she says.
"It's okay," I reply. "I'm not gonna hurt you."
"Then what are you going to do?"
"I'm going to take you to shelter. Come with me and my friends."
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on October 25, 2015
Pft, such a Kyle thing to say XD Anyway waiting for this shit to get real now #Can'tWait.
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on October 24, 2015
XD im rooting for Joria because I'm on her said but Javkie...but Joria..but Jackie...Ah! GO JACKIEEEEE X3
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on October 24, 2015
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I was like magic!! (magic is good :))
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on October 27, 2015
Just read it.
It was awesome!!!
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on October 25, 2015
I READ IT
HOLY NUTS
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on October 24, 2015
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on October 24, 2015
HHOOOOOOLLLLLLLUYYYYYYYYYYY
SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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on October 23, 2015
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YAY!!!!
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on October 24, 2015
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
YESSSSSS!
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Tell ya, if you did some badass fights in here too, with like the Robots vs Some of us, that'd be cool shit. @sapphirethehedgehog Best look out though XD
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on October 23, 2015
Yeah!!! :3
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Amazing!!! Please write more.
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on October 23, 2015
awesome story!!!
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on July 19, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 25, 2015
OMG
OMG HOLY SHIT
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on June 23, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 22, 2015
Sapphire: I'm a robot?! D: noooooooo!
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on June 21, 2015
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*fangirl screams* YES YES YES!!!!!!
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on June 23, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
WRITE MOREEEE JACKIE MORE
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on June 21, 2015
This story is great!
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Thank you!
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on June 03, 2015
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on June 03, 2015
AWESOMELY EPICALLY KEWL
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Thank you!
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on April 01, 2015
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on March 07, 2015
Awesome nice idea of the new anti thing could be tense XD <3
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome!
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Welcome to Dauntless, Swift!
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Yeah, I like it
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on March 06, 2015
Btw you seen my new pic?
Ik it's rubbish, but look at it for me? I could use feedback.
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on March 06, 2015
Yeah! XD
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
IT WAS CELINA! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!
And thanks for using my idea! :D
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Np! Glad you liked it!
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
its divergent style XD
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XD I LOVE DIVERGENT
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on March 05, 2015
XD Yeah, ik it's got a little Divergent in there,
but remember that I made the Sonic-Divergent cross-over, so... yeah.
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on March 07, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
IS THE ROBOT CELINA OMG OMG I WANNA KNOWWWW
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on March 02, 2015
Awesome!
Lilanna: *turns head this way*
*presses button that closes FNAF-style door, separating Lilanna and us*
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on February 27, 2015
Dun dun dun Sonic ye douche don't hurt a girl like that u mean man thing XD
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Weren't his fault. He was a robot XD
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Yeah well still
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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Demn..this is a great story! Too bad it's too late for oc's..alwrll! Still I love it!
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Well ignore what I just said I will see ^.^ thanks Jackie
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on February 25, 2015
Who the hell said it was too late?
All you need is to make an OC on LilyIcicle's page for the main story, I'll look at it, and see where I can fit you in.
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 25, 2015
Pfttttt bring it! :D
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on February 23, 2015
pft no
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
PLOT TWIST!!!!
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IK!
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Awesome! If ya need any help, just ask. I'm here to help :)
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on February 21, 2015
Trying to work on it now
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on February 21, 2015
When ya gonna write the next chap? x3
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on February 21, 2015
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on February 21, 2015
ITZ SWIFT HEHH
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on February 20, 2015
Awesome!
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Thanks!
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
Well swift time to die Kyle's ganna come bite chu:D
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SWIFT IS A MOBIAN, YOU IDIOT!
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Wait are dumb they speak the same language
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on February 20, 2015
It should be Danish!
Wait lemme check
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on February 20, 2015
Yeah I put it in google translate and it said it was no in Sweden -_-
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
What!? I googled that -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Actually, it's Danish.
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on February 20, 2015
Don't chu go Sweden on meh -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Still ganna do it XD
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on February 20, 2015
-_- This ain't a zombie apocalypse
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on February 20, 2015
I knew that <.< >.> still ganna bite them :D
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