The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

One of the few to remain a Mobian, discover Jackie's side of the story before the event began, how she founded the Dauntless Mobians, and her life being the leader in a world where most people are now robots.

published on February 19, 2015356 reads 39 readers 110 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue: I'll Miss You

Yet another threat has arrived for us from Eggman. Ever since I stayed a Mobian with Sonic, I have grown to hate him. Every threat, every plot, I cannot stand. Even his vicious cackles are unbearable, in which I sometimes wake from my sleep whenever I hear it.
When I enter the living area, I see Sonic, along with Tails and Knuckles. "What's going on?" I ask.
"We're stopping that plot," Sonic replies.
"Then I'm coming."
Tails shakes his head. "You need to stay here, Jackie," he says.
"What?" I look down in disappointment. "Why?"
Sonic turns to face Tails and Knuckles. "Guys, is it okay I have a private talk with Jackie?"
They nod, and leave the room. I am alone with Sonic.
"Jackie, I love you. You know I do," he says. "And if I could choose, then you could come."
I smile. "Then why can't I?"
"The others think it's too dangerous for you. I'd never forgive myself if you were captured, let alone killed." He looks at me with sadness marked on his face. "You understand, right?"
I nod. "Of course I-"
But I'm not able to finish my sentence. His lips cut me off. They press hard onto mine, and I am seduced by his passion. I press my hand to his chest as I return the kiss. The other arm, I wrap around his neck.
He pulls away, far enough for him to see my face, but still close enough so I can feel his breath on my fur. "I won't be gone long."
I lean in closer. "I'll miss you."
"So will I." He plants a final kiss onto my cheek, and I watch him run off with Tails and Knuckles to stop Eggman.
As I watch them fade smaller, I whisper to myself, "I always do miss you."
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Frostgoddess
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on October 25, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Pft, such a Kyle thing to say XD Anyway waiting for this shit to get real now #Can'tWait.
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on October 24, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
XD im rooting for Joria because I'm on her said but Javkie...but Joria..but Jackie...Ah! GO JACKIEEEEE X3
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on October 24, 2015
Lady_Artemis
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Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
I was like magic!! (magic is good )
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on October 27, 2015
Stardancer
Just read it.
It was awesome!!!
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on October 25, 2015
TricksterOfLife
I READ IT
HOLY NUTS
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on October 24, 2015
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on October 24, 2015
TricksterOfLife
HHOOOOOOLLLLLLLUYYYYYYYYYYY
SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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on October 23, 2015
Lady_Artemis
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Frostgoddess
YAY!!!!
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on October 24, 2015
Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
Stardancer
YESSSSSS!
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on October 23, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
YESSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Tell ya, if you did some badass fights in here too, with like the Robots vs Some of us, that'd be cool shit. @sapphirethehedgehog Best look out though XD
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on October 23, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Yeah!!! :3
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Stardancer
Amazing!!! Please write more.
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on October 23, 2015
Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
awesome story!!!
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on July 19, 2015
MidnightDaHedgie
Awesome!
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on June 25, 2015
TricksterOfLife
OMG
OMG HOLY SHIT
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on June 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
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on June 22, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: I'm a robot?! D: noooooooo!
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on June 21, 2015
Lady_Artemis
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
*fangirl screams* YES YES YES!!!!!!
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on June 23, 2015
HappyMe115
Yay!
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on June 22, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
TricksterOfLife
WRITE MOREEEE JACKIE MORE
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on June 21, 2015
MangletheFox
This story is great!
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Lady_Artemis
Thank you!
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on June 03, 2015
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on June 03, 2015
The_Demigod_Timelord_Wizard
AWESOMELY EPICALLY KEWL
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Lady_Artemis
Thank you!
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on April 01, 2015
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on April 01, 2015
Frostgoddess
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on March 07, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Awesome nice idea of the new anti thing could be tense XD
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on March 06, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Awesome!
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Lady_Artemis
Welcome to Dauntless, Swift!
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SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Yeah, I like it
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on March 06, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Btw you seen my new pic?
Ik it's rubbish, but look at it for me? I could use feedback.
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on March 06, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
TricksterOfLife
IT WAS CELINA! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!
And thanks for using my idea!
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Lady_Artemis
Np! Glad you liked it!
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TricksterOfLife
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
its divergent style XD
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
XD I LOVE DIVERGENT
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on March 05, 2015
Lady_Artemis
XD Yeah, ik it's got a little Divergent in there,
but remember that I made the Sonic-Divergent cross-over, so... yeah.
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
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on March 07, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
TricksterOfLife
IS THE ROBOT CELINA OMG OMG I WANNA KNOWWWW
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on March 02, 2015
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
Lilanna: *turns head this way*
*presses button that closes FNAF-style door, separating Lilanna and us*
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on February 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Dun dun dun Sonic ye douche don't hurt a girl like that u mean man thing XD
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Lady_Artemis
Weren't his fault. He was a robot XD
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SpinnerFTW
Yeah well still
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on February 22, 2015
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The_Panda_Otaku
Demn..this is a great story! Too bad it's too late for oc's..alwrll! Still I love it!
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The_Panda_Otaku
Well ignore what I just said I will see ^.^ thanks Jackie
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on February 25, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Who the hell said it was too late?
All you need is to make an OC on LilyIcicle's page for the main story, I'll look at it, and see where I can fit you in.
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 25, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Pfttttt bring it!
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on February 23, 2015
HappyMe115
Really?
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Lady_Artemis
READ IT!
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on February 23, 2015
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on February 23, 2015
SpinnerFTW
pft no
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
HappyMe115
This is by far the best of future of mobius backstories ever.
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Lady_Artemis
Thank you!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
PLOT TWIST!!!!
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Lady_Artemis
IK!
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SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Awesome! If ya need any help, just ask. I'm here to help
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on February 21, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Trying to work on it now
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on February 21, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
When ya gonna write the next chap? x3
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on February 21, 2015
TricksterOfLife
ITZ SWIFT HEHH
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on February 20, 2015
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!
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Lady_Artemis
Thanks!
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015