If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 9.

Two Years Later

I wandered aimlessly into the rankings room and turned on the board.  I didn't even know how long it had been, all I knew was that I was not going to forget Annabeth, so I checked up on her every day.  She always left her sink running so I could use that as a sort of way to watch her.  (Don't ask how.)  It may sound stalker-ish, but what was I supposed to do about that.  I needed to see her, but I couldn't physically be with her.  On the screen the list popped up.  This was the first time I had looked at it since Apollo showed it to me that first day.  It now read:

OLYMPIANS RANKS:
1. Zeus
2. Hera
3. Poseidon
4. Athena
5. Percy
6. Artemis
7. Apollo
8. Demeter
9. Ares
10. Hephaestus
11. Hermes
12. Dionysus              (Keep that grape-pummeling wine dude away from me!)
13. Hestia

   I sighed at the sight of my name two places above Apollo's.  Last time I saw the board, I was three places below him.  Ares and Demeter had dropped a lot too.  No wonder they hated me especially.  I try not to think of it as me doing good; it's just me doing nothing and them doing things to get moved down, and I just take their place.  If I overtook Athena, I'd have some serious fighting to do.
   I easily made my way to the room where I could see Annabeth.  I concentrated on her face, and located the nearest source of water I could reach her with.  I used water as a sort of looking glass to see the mortal world.  Anything I wanted, I just had to find something wet near it and I could see it.
   Annabeth was on that weird Greek battleship thing, the Argo II, again.  Everyone was on deck; Annabeth, that little weirdo Leo, the dead girl Hazel, the tomboy Aphrodite Piper, superman Jason, sumo-baby Frank, and kick-butt satyr Hedge.  They all knew I existed, but they all figured I was dead because whenever they asked Annabeth about me, she just cried.
   Suddenly, the picture was covered with black fog.  I could see through it the shadowy figures that were attacking the ship.  They were hitting down posts and poles and hitting holes in the deck.  The Leo kid screamed things at his Happy the Bronze Dragon Figurehead and he began to breathe fire.  Not that that helped with the smoke at all.  Annabeth was paralyzed in fear; I could see her because I was focusing in on her.  She was shaking and holding her breath, then I realized why.  The deck was swarming with spiders, and Annabeth's severe hereditary arachnophobia had kicked in.  All children of Athena had it, but I think it was worse for Annabeth than anyone else, even Athena herself.
   I saw a post break in the distance, and somehow, my mind calculated that in seventeen seconds, it would break and swing right into Annabeth.  I had to help and think quickly.  I couldn't take the chance that the fog would conceal me, because I would get in a LOT of trouble if I incinerated all of the Six of The Prophecy.  I had to make sure no one was looking, and I'd have to appear behind Annabeth.  Fifteen seconds now.  Dam, I think fast.  No one was looking at Annabeth right now, they were fighting the smoke figures.  I could focus on my hand and make it mortal before the rest of me to cover Annabeth's eyes.  I would take the swinging wood for her; my spine would probably stop it from hitting her.
   My mind was set, so I concentrated on the ship.  On Annabeth.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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on July 04, 2015
ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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on July 16, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014