If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 10.

-Annabeth-

I was frozen in fear.  Maybe if I didn't move the spiders wouldn't see me.  I snapped out of it when I saw a huge wooden splinter about the size of a spear swinging towards me.  I screamed and stared at it, horrified, until I felt something really hot on my back.  I was about to turn around to look when a hand clamped over my eyes and the arm attached to it turned me sideways so the wood would have to go through him before it got to me.  The warmth cooled down and I heard the sound of ripping flesh and cracking bone.  I winced and turned around, though I really didn't want to see who had sacrificed themselves for me.  Standing there with a large piece of wood sticking out from his back, and the point in his stomach, was Percy Jackson.  I wanted to cry and kiss him and laugh and kill him and scream and thank him all at once, but he just smiled.
   "Oh, look.  I've been impaled."  He grinned and pulled out the piece of wood, ichor draining down his back and sides and soaking his T-shirt.  He held his hands out on either side of him and the water all around the boat shot up and cleared out the smoke and all of the weird things that were attacking us.  He looked fine, like he did this kind of thing every day.
   "Now, just give me a minute, okay?"  He said and ran and jumped off the side of the ship.  I stood there staring at where he has jumped with my mouth gaping and all the others looking worriedly at me.  Percy had just come and saved me.  I didn't know he was still watching me, let alone looking after me.  I thought of all the times good things had happened, and how I left the water running just in case Percy or at least Poseidon could see it.  Now her was here, and so was Jason.  Oh, Gods, Jason.  He thought Percy was dead.  It was easier for Leo and Piper, or at least Frank and Hazel.  I would have some explaining to do for Jason.  Percy shot out of the water and landed feet-first on the deck and began walking towards me like this was just a meeting for lunch, and like he hadn't abandoned me for immortality.  He stopped a few feet in front of he and held his hands out like he was about to hug me, but he didn't.
   "I suppose you want to attack me now? Something like 'Seaweed Brain, how could you?' would be refreshing right now."  He seemed so godlike it was scary.  I heaved a deep breath and said,
   "Seaweed Brain, how could you?"  And ran for him, grabbing him in a tight hug and sobbing into his shoulder, but only for a minute.  I could feel the rest of the Six's eyes on me, and I couldn't help but feel like there were supposed to be seven.  The Prophecy said we would need a god's help, so maybe it was Percy.  I pulled away and looked at him for a little while.  He was just smiling at me like a mad man.  I had to smile back.  His sea green eyes lit up, and I noticed they were more blue now.  His hair had been bleached a little by the sun and was now dark brown instead of black.  His shirt had a hole in it where the wood had been, and it gave way to what looked like a six-pack.  His shirt was slightly stained gold around the hole.  I took a few steps back and the rest of the Six looked at him.  He didn't seem fazed by the attention at all.
   "This is Percy Jackson?"  Leo asked.  I could see some fire licking at his fingers and interest burning in his eyes.  "I thought you were dead."  Percy looked like he wanted to kill Leo right then, which I suppose was the 'gods have a short temper' stereotype, though it looked pretty real to me.  He managed to calm himself down and answered the son of Hephaestus,
   "I'm not dead.  I am very much alive, thank you."  I was sure that if he had Leo's fire power, he would be engulfed in flames right now.  I panicked and grabbed his hand and led him to the opposite side of the ship deck, while the others went about cleaning up.
   "What are you doing here?"  I demanded.
   "Well, I saw you were about to die, so naturally I came to help you."  He said.  It sounded like something that would come out of Dionysus's mouth.  I shivered.
   "Yes, but why?  Why now?  Where have you been when I call for you, when I stay up every night waiting for you to appear at the foot of my bed and call me Wise Girl and kiss me?  Kiss me, Seaweed Brain.  Kiss me."  I sobbed.  It was too much for me to handle.  I knew I didn't really love Jason, but I loved Percy.  Gods, I loved him.  He pulled me in and kissed me.  It was something Aphrodite would be proud of.  He released me and I dreamily slipped out of his arms.
   "Goodbye, Annabeth Chase."  He said, and something about his tone made it sound like he should be saying 'Hazel Grace'.  (Shut up!  I'm a daughter of Athena, I'm allowed to make 'The Fault in Our Stars' references.)  And it made my heart to think that he didn't call me Wise Girl.
   He jumped off the side of the boat after warning me not to look unless I wanted to be incinerated.  I didn't look over the side, but I was still momentarily blinded my the flash of white light coming from the sea, and the tears filling my eyes.  I loved him.  Gods, I loved him.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014