If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 4.

The Hunters

I found myself with Apollo at the top of a grassy hill with large silvery tents I know as belonging to Artemis's Hunters.  Why I was here, I don't know, because surely he'd take me to Tyson or Grover before Thalia.  He walked me to the edge of the largest tent and held me to the side.
   "I'll get her out."  He whispered and walked in.  I could just hear him calling all the girls in there sweetheart and honey, but I could definitely hear Artemis shouting at him.  He came out a minute later with Thalia.  He so liked her!
   "Let go of me you-"  Her voice trailed off when she saw me.  I waved awkwardly at her.
   "Aren't you dead or something?"  She asked, generally confused.  Apollo let her go and she slid a few feet away from him.  
   "No, I am very much alive, thank you."  I responded.  She gave me a look like I was crazy.  Apollo rolled his eyes at my modesty.
   "Alive and immortal."  He laughed.  I shot him a 'shut up' look, but he just shrugged and gave me a crooked smile.  Thalia laughed until she realize no one else was.
   "Wait, you're serious?"  Her smile dropped as Apollo nodded for me, still smiling like a ninny.  I couldn't help smile too, even though Thalia was staring at me.  What else was new?
   "Well, I don't believe you."  She said stubbornly.  She began walking back to the tent, and I had the sudden urge to convince her that I was telling the truth.  She couldn't just accuse me of lying with no prof. I panicked and called out to her,
   "Shoot me!"  That sure got her attention.  She turned and flashed a wicked grin.
  "Okay."  She pulled an arrow out of her quiver slow enough for me to object, but of course I didn't.  She slowly slid the slit of the arrow into the bow string and aimed it's head at me, pulling back slowly.  I casually put my thumbs in my pockets and shifted my weight to one leg.  She loosed the arrow, and it flew right past me, grazing my ear.  Hunters of Artemis never miss their targets, so I knew she wasn't aiming for me.
   "I believe you."  She said finally, throwing her quiver back over her shoulder, and she walked back to the flap opening of the tent.
   "Goodbye, Percy Jackson."  She smiled and closed the flap behind her.  I turned to Apollo who was staring at the opening with a loving gaze.  I snickered, and he shoved me over.  I landed next to the arrow she had shot; it hadn't gone very far; and picked it up.  I put it in my sock and covered it with my jeans.  FOr some reason, I had a feeling I might need it some day.
   "Come on,"  Apollo said, "Next stop, Sally Jackson!"  He shouted, and we faded into the hillside.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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on July 04, 2015
ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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on July 16, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014