If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 3.

The Ghost King

I walked out of the cabin slightly dazed and really happy.  Apollo took one look at me and laughed a little.
   "I'm guessing it didn't go too well?"  He asked wiping some ichor off my face.  I slapped his hand away and grinned,
   "Better than I thought it would."  I said, referring to the kiss, but he wouldn't know that.  He pat me on the back and pointed towards the canoe lake by the shore.
   "Want to go clean off before we see anyone else?  That shoulder looks like it hurts."  He said, and I realized that my arm was practically dangling from the rest of my body in a disgusting mass of golden goo.  I winced and bit my lip, looking away.  
   "Yeah, that'd be good."  I forced out, the pain now stinging behind my eyes.  I grit my teeth and ran the space to the lake and jumped in.  Immediately I felt better.  The ichor washed off along with the injuries themselves.  I took a deep underwater breath and surfaced right by the shore next to my tour guide, completely dry.  
   "Who to next?"  He asked.  I was about to answer when he interrupted, "You know what?  I'll choose.  It'll be more fun that way."  And with that he grabbed me by the shoulder and we disappeared.  We regained solid from in a fiery hell-hole I've come to know as the Underworld.  We were in the sort of reception hall, but of course everyone was dead, so Charon noticed us as soon as we formed.  Apollo gave him a godly look, the ones that shows 'what could happen if you don't do what I want' images, and he showed us to the doors.  I wondered if I had a look, or if it was just the Olympians.
   Soon we found ourselves at a small quiet area close to Hades palace.  There was a small boy curled up in a corner bawling his eyes out dressed in all black clothes with a Stygian blade hanging at his side.  Apollo drifted back out of the way so I couldn't see him anymore, and I stepped cautiously towards the son of Hades.  I knew what happened when Nico's sister died, and I had been held responsible.  I know he doesn't deal well with loss.  
   I stopped a few feet away,
   "Nico?"  I said cautiously.  He probably thought I was a shade or something, us being in the land of the dead and all.  He turned around slowly and looked me up and down.  He blinked a few times, as if he couldn't believe what he was seeing.
   "Percy?"  He responded, still in the fettle position, "You're alive?" His voice was shaky and soft, like a wounded fourteen year old warrior, which I guess he was.  He got up cautiously like he was afraid I'd disappear at any second, then he lunged himself at me.  I thought he was attacking like Annabeth, but he didn't reach for his weapon.  He leaped on me, arms outstretched, and almost knocked me over with sheer momentum.  I caught both of us before we tumbled to the floor on top of each other.
   "You're alive!"  He shouted.  It was happier than I'd ever seen the little guy.  Still in my arms, he planted a little kiss on my cheek then let go.  I just looked at him for a second, then came to the conclusion that he probably did it as a brotherly think, or maybe he just didn't know what else to do.  He smiled like crazy at me, but somehow his eyes kept their gloom.  It must be a child of Hades thing.  
   "What happened?  Where did you go?  How are you still here?  Are you really immortal?  Was Annabeth telling the truth?"  He threw the questions at me like throwing knives, and the last one hit me square in the chest.  I swallowed hard and tried to speak, but no words came out.  I felt in the pocket of my jeans for Riptide and pulled it out.  This was probably the easiest explanation I could give.  I took the cap off my magic pen, thankful I still had it with me, and it grew into a bronze sword.  I carefully pulled the blade across the palm of my hand, Divergent style, and let Nico watch it bleed ichor.  He stepped back from me fearfully, then put on his brave face.  Why anyone, especially Nico, would be afraid of me, I don't know.  He stepped forwards and unsheathed his sword.  Why does everyone want to kill me suddenly, as soon as I can't be killed.  He ran towards me, blade raised, then stopped mid-stride and threw it to the ground with a sob.  
   I edged towards him and pulled him into a hug, consoling him in any way I could.  He breathed against my hair, crying into it and shaking like a traumatized puppy.   I pat him on the head and he brought his mouth close to my ear, and I couldn't help but think this was a little strange.  But, he was like the little brother I never had.  My only brother was a cyclops, so I can't really hug him without him crushing the air out of me.
   "I love you."  He breathed against the back of my neck.
   "I love you, too."  Then I realized something about the way he said it.  It wasn't the way Tyson and I said it to each other, It was how Annabeth and I did.  I quickly added, "Like a brother, Nico.  I love you like a brother."  I pushed away slowly and saw a slightly disappointed look on his face.  I felt bad for him; there isn't much that the world can do for a slightly depressed, fourteen year old, gay son of Hades.
   "I'm sorry."  I whispered, then slunk around the corner to find Apollo waiting.  'Awkward'  He mouthed, and grabbed me by the shoulder.  The scene melted around me, but I could still hear Nico's sobbing.  I might as well be dead to him.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014