If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 13.

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I was awake when Annabeth opened her eyes.  They were more grey than I remembered.
   "Percy?"  She whispered.  Her voice sounded like it hadn't been used in millenniums.  I hated that it reminded me of how old I really was.
   "Yeah."  I answered and smiled down at her.
   "Did I really die, or was that a dream."  She croaked.  She tried to sit up but winced from pain, so I helped her.
   "You did.  I'm sorry.  I made a deal with Hades to bring you back to life when I was..."  I let my voice trail off.  No way was I letting Annabeth know how long she'd been dead, or that now there was a Percy cabin at Camp Half-Blood.  I was no slut, so there were only four kids in there, and all of them either had black heir and grey eyes, or blonde hair and green eyes.  I never forgot Annabeth.  I never will.
   "I love you Seaweed Brain."  She whispered.  The nickname defrosted my heart turned ice cold from centuries of loss.
   "I love you too Wise Girl."  I grabbed her face and pulled her into a kiss. Remembering she was only seventeen, I let go softly after a few seconds.
   "How long was I dead?"  She cleared her throat.  "Please tell me.  You know I don't like being kept in the dark."  I hesitated, then warned her,
   "If I tell you that, then you'll know how old I am.  I don't think you want to know that."  She bit her lip, considering the consequences, then responded,
   "I don't, but I really want to at the same time."  She studied my face like she was looking for age in my eyes, and I have to admit that she would probably find it.
   "If I tell you, you have to promise not to freak out.  Don't act like things are different, because they aren't.  I still love you."  I was just trying to scare her out of asking now, and I knew she knew it.
   "That bad, huh?"  She kidded, "Tell me anyway.  I won't freak out."  I licked my lips and told her the stats.
   "The year is 6,376.  You've been dead for 4,362 years, and I am 4,378 years old.  Please don't freak out!"  I said quickly, and her face paled with every number.
   "Can you take me to Camp?"  She asked after a few deep breaths.  I didn't want her to meet the Percy kids and look at me all funny, but she would find her way anyway eventually.
   "Sure."  I answered.  "Turn around and close your eyes.  Do not under any circumstances open your eyes until I tell you to.  I don't want to hurt you."  She nodded and I held her hand.  I turned her face and made sure her eyes were closed, then made a bubble of water around our hands so I wouldn't burn her too bad.  I quickly transformed into my immortal form and transported us as fast as I could to Camp Half-Blood while my magical water barrier sizzled around our hands and began to evaporate.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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on July 16, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014