If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 12.

Never Forget, Never Surrender

I marked off the 4,362nd tally mark in my book for years at Olympus.  I re-wrote on the title of the book to make myself feel better.  'Never Forget, Never Surrender.'   Was it my birthday already?  Sometimes I forget.  Time can do that to you.  But sure enough, the date from the back of the book matched.  Horray... Birthdays are so boring.  No one cars after you reach three thousand, and I was 4,378 today.  If anyone did anything, I would laugh.  But today was the one day I was looking forward to, ever since Annabeth died.  Never forget, never surrender.  I would keep my memories of her, forever.  I had made a deal with Hades.  He said if I could still remember Annabeth's first and last name, hair and eye color, and age of death by the time I was as old as he was, he would bring her back to life if she hadn't chosen to go for reincarnation already.  And he was 4,378.  Take that Hades!  I went through the information in my head.
Name:  Annabeth Chase
Description:  Blonde, Grey eyes
Age of Death: 17
I faltered on that last one.  Was she sixteen or seventeen?  I decided to go with the information I had studied and not change my answer at the last minute.  Athena taught me that.
   I found Hades and reminded him of our deal.  A sly smile slid across his face.
   "Ah, you remembered.  Go ahead.  You have to tell me all the information I asked you for, I won't ask again."  I growled at him, and relayed the information like it was my favorite song.
   "It all seems to be correct according to my sources."  I didn't want to ask who his sources were.  "Shall we go see if your Annabeth has stayed in Elysium all these years?"  He taunted.  He didn't believe I could pull it off.  I didn't blame him.  I found myself in the underworld.  Hades was standing by the Styx facing a shade.  A few seconds later, he turned around to face me.
   "I don't suppose we want to incinerate her, do we."  With that he and I flashed into our mortal forms, I made mine look the same age as Annabeth because I figured it would be creepy if I looked thirty or something.
   Hades put a hand on her head and she began to look more solid.  The color flooded back into her and she dropped to the ground.  I managed to use this cool thing I can do where I turn into gravity-defying water then back again to catch her before she fell.  I gave Hades a look of thanks and held Annabeth tight in my arms, teleporting back to Olympus to the room where I know no one will be.  Its the room of nothing; it has no point except that it is only reachable through teleportation.
  
   I sat for hours with her in my lap without her moving, but I wasn't worried.  As much as a pain Hades could be, he always kept his word.  I stroked the hair off her face and whispered in her ear,
   "Never forgot, never surrendered..."  Then I rest my head on her shoulder and drifted off to sleep, smelling the sweet scent of my Wise Girl.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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on July 04, 2015
ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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on July 16, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014