Songs I Make

if you know me you know i like making songs stories poems, etc. heres some of the songs i made and reminer : never said they were good. also theres instructions on how to read it by the title.

published on April 10, 201962 reads 22 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 6.

Bittersweet Goods ( verse 1 , chorus , verse 2 , chorus, bridge , bridge )

verse 1


tell me once tell me twice
oh you love me? thats nice
tell me three times known as thrice
my brains no game burn the dice
im loving it but hating it at the same time
tell me more of your bittersweet lies

chorus



sweet as sugar bitter as lemon
got a bland taste remind me of cinnamon
im getting used to this poinsoned apple
no more of your tricks
but those  lies i hear oh
nothing more bittersweet then this


verse 2


im living on every lie you tell
im a get a cavity in my heart? oh well.
im delivering it to my brain  like mail
tryna tear it down but the pans made of metal
im listening to your lies, thinking your mental
honey your bittersweet lies light my candle

bridge


poisoned sweets in my mouth
and although im immune
venom spreading south
i might die soon
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FuckYou
Good job me
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on August 14, 2019
caspertheminorman
I may make a few changes, but could I see if I could actually make one of them a (crappy) guitar + singing cover?
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DemonQueen
id be honored. @mildly.annoyedpringle
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on May 24, 2019
DemonQueen
of course! @mildly.annoyedpringle
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caspertheminorman
alright!
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on May 22, 2019
Queenofshadows
WOAH!! :3 NICE!!
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DemonQueen
tanks
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DemonQueen
:D
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on April 10, 2019
Queenofshadows
Ya Welcome
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