Songs I Make

if you know me you know i like making songs stories poems, etc. heres some of the songs i made and reminer : never said they were good. also theres instructions on how to read it by the title.

published on April 10, 201962 reads 22 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 5.

Monster inside us ( verse 1, chorus, verse 2, chorus)

verse 1
cant stop thinking about you
when im looking at things that remind me of you
cant stop thinking about pain
when  everything you say is something i claimed

chorus
you hide
i hide
everybody hides
from this monster inside
you ran
i ran
everbody ran
except for the ones who cant
tryong to breathe
decieve
what i need
tryna live another day
from the game this monster plays

verse 2
clawing and crawling my way to the surface
but we all know its not worth it
jumping flying feels like im dying
but you all can see my crying.
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FuckYou
Good job me
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on August 14, 2019
caspertheminorman
I may make a few changes, but could I see if I could actually make one of them a (crappy) guitar + singing cover?
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DemonQueen
id be honored. @mildly.annoyedpringle
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on May 24, 2019
DemonQueen
of course! @mildly.annoyedpringle
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caspertheminorman
alright!
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on May 22, 2019
Queenofshadows
WOAH!! :3 NICE!!
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DemonQueen
tanks
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DemonQueen
:D
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on April 10, 2019
Queenofshadows
Ya Welcome
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