Chapter 6
Chapter fiveEmptiness surrounded me with tension in the air. "She's going" I recognised the Alpha's deep voice. I looked at myself I had cuts all over me, they bleed but a few were blocked up by dried blood.Smelling the air I noticed I was at the edge of the territory. I licked my paws and put on an innocent face. "Alpha she's only a pup!" It was that guy from the other day, unless it was a few days ago. "Shadow she's to strong" so his name was Shadow thanks not-so-good Alpha. Shadow growled at the Alpha "a battle eh? You know what made me Alpha right?" My eyes flickered open I stood next to Shadow Protectively even though I could do nothing. I skimmed the crowd for Night he was nowhere to be seen. My tail went down and my ears laid back as I growled the alpha just knocked me out. Everything was black.
-flash back-
The sun shone on me as I walked down into the den where my brother slept. I hunched down and crept up to my brother. I jumped on him and he yelped taken by surprise. I smirked happily "ughhh sis" he rolled his eyes at me and lay back down "wanna go and play?" I said dryly "of cause,I do" he replied sarcastically "ok.." I walked off my tail low, just like my feelings. The light seemed to dim.
-end of flash back-
Night's POV
"Night wake up " "huh?" The Alpha stood over me. I sniffed the air the alpha he'd just been with my sister I expected her to still be here. She wasn't. "Where's my sis" I said angrily "oh don't worry about her" the alpha said "she's out on a hunt, yes that's right, now let me give you a tour" he was obviously lying but I had to admit he was quick on his feet. "And I want you to meet Blaze"
The Alpha, and his mate took me around the place, I just tuned out what they said and thought, where was my sister? Why the sudden change?, it seemed every time a 'door opens' it closes right after. Trapped forever in an endless circle of misfortune.
Cloud's POV
I curled up my tail reaching my nose. The fluffy tip seemed somewhat comforting. I checked again over my fur I had a few specks of sandy peach against the grey although my body had been thrown around like a seal playing with its food. Covered in scratches like the bite marks of a seals teeth. I had know where to run, know where to hide. I just sat there, thinking all the while wondering what was happening back in the pack...
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Authors note
Hoi~! It's me Chara, I know this may be short I wrote in notes when I had no internet, but if you read this please go read my new book!, it is called: Hurts to smile..
It's about Raven and her doll, everyday people make the fire in her mind grow although she doesn't speak much. I found it greatly enjoyable and descriptive plus it took me a while to write it ^-^ take care, -Chara
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Age: Young adult she-wolf
Rank: Lone wolf
Back story:
Shadow has lost her pack to another vicious pack of wolves. She is the only survivor. In fact, she is very wary around other wolves but gets along well with foxes. Her best friend is a silver fox named Marko. See More▼
Power: Can use the shadows to disappear and appear anywhere that she has been previously.
Color: Black with white socks, her eyes are lavender
Extra: She has scars from the attack
Age: Adult Wolf
Their distinguished achievement that made them Alpha: Reunited a broken pack, and recruited some oddities.
BackStory:
Skorlün was raised by an Omega, and a Rogue packmember of the Bramble Leaf Pack. His Mother, the Rogue had killed her own pack members while defending her den. She was of a near midnight black pelt, with razor sharp See More▼ claws, and blue eyes. His Father was the Omega, raised from birth as a scapegoat for the clan, due to a deformation on his tail. Raised outside of a clan, Skorlün was a loner. He had learned also though that friendship was a bigger ally than the life of a loner from that of the Fox clans. He retraced his Father's steps back to his clan, where he fought both broken side's Beta, and won his way to Alpha of both packs.
Appearance:
He is a moonlight silver pelted wolf, of slim nature. His eyes are purple. His tail is twisted like his Father's, but not as much, while he has battle scars that have yet to fully heal adorning his eye and shoulder.
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Age: Adolescent fox
Rank: Explorer/medic
Backstory: Her dad, Forest, ate poisonous berries and went insane. He killed Indigo's mom, Moon. Forest then abandoned Indigo. However, Indigo got struck by lightning and developed the power to knock somebody out just by aiming a paw at them.
Power: Can knock someone out by pointing at them with a paw See More▼
Color: Deep indigo, with streaks of purple and navy blue (this was caused by the lightning strike). A white star symbol is in between her eyes, which are emerald green.
Extra details: She's strong, clever, and passionate, but she also can be mean sometimes.
I love the story so far! I can really picture it in my mind. You do a great job describing things! :)
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Age: Young Adult Fox
Rank: Sapper (Trap maker and such)
Backstory: Born to a small family below an oak tree within the small Oak forest, he was first out of three children to be born. He grew up doing things he had seen many two-legged creatures doing, using a strange herb that was long and thin, but strong enough to lift himself with enough of the See More▼ herb. He used sticks and other items to build small shelters and odd contraptions before he was sent out into the real world on his own.
Power: No supernatural powers, but he has learned he art of Two-legeed creature construction and trapping.
Color: His fur coat is similar to that of a normal Asian Red Fox, though with what seems to be a black fur mark on the right side of his face that forms a symetrical circular object with ridges in it.
Extras: He uses leaves to carry supplies he would not normally be able to carry, but this tactic makes him easier to track, and easier to catch.
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Name: Cloud (CloudedMoon)
Age : pup
Rank: none yet ( alpha m/f, medic, so on)
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