Is this it?..
Cloud's POVI awoke in an empty cave on a pile of leaves. A few stars ahead. There was an eiry silence around me so I turned my head to the entrance of the cave. I reckoned It was about 6:29 in the morning. I stood up on all fours, felling pretty well rested. My outburst drained most of my energy that wasn't that nice to be honest. Mist wrapped and twisted around the trees covering the ground. I shuddered at the thought of being alone in the dark. "Morning" I heard a male pup behind me it wasn't Night. Turning around I said morning back, but it was kind of awkward. "I'm Gaige pleased to meet you" he remarked warmly "I'm Cloud" I replied still shaken up about yesterday. Who was that other wolf? Does he have a power? Do I have a power? Thoughts ran through my head..
Gaige took me to the best viewing place where we watched the sun rise. That was when my brother ran up to us and growled at Gaige. "Wow night I'm only being nice to your sister" but didn't stop him from growling. He glanced at me and saw I was untouched so he stopped growling and sat down next to me. Soon after all the wolves came out of there caves and the alpha strode out as if today was special.
"Oh poop, I forgot today's the alpha female picking" Gaige said as he ran off. "What does this mean for the pups?" Night asked "beats me, but I don't wanna find out" I jinxed myself because just then we were swept up into a crowd of rushing wolves although they were mostly female. We ran along side them as the sun peeked over the trees climbing higher. All the pups were gathered in groups. Boys were paired with girls it was an unsettling sight for me.
I sat next brother at the back of the wolves, "psst you can't with your brother" "why not" I growled my eye clouding over with black "uh uh never mind you do what you want" "that's what I thought" my changed back to normal and I continued to look through the many legs. It was a long process but finally the alpha barked he had chosen-- I didn't get to hear because I was swept up and thrown. I covered my eyes with my paws "not again" I thought I was about fall to the ground with a thud but I felt a dark presence and I was caught. My life flashed before my eyes was this it?...
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Age: Young adult she-wolf
Rank: Lone wolf
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Shadow has lost her pack to another vicious pack of wolves. She is the only survivor. In fact, she is very wary around other wolves but gets along well with foxes. Her best friend is a silver fox named Marko. See More▼
Power: Can use the shadows to disappear and appear anywhere that she has been previously.
Color: Black with white socks, her eyes are lavender
Extra: She has scars from the attack
Age: Adult Wolf
Their distinguished achievement that made them Alpha: Reunited a broken pack, and recruited some oddities.
BackStory:
Skorlün was raised by an Omega, and a Rogue packmember of the Bramble Leaf Pack. His Mother, the Rogue had killed her own pack members while defending her den. She was of a near midnight black pelt, with razor sharp See More▼ claws, and blue eyes. His Father was the Omega, raised from birth as a scapegoat for the clan, due to a deformation on his tail. Raised outside of a clan, Skorlün was a loner. He had learned also though that friendship was a bigger ally than the life of a loner from that of the Fox clans. He retraced his Father's steps back to his clan, where he fought both broken side's Beta, and won his way to Alpha of both packs.
Appearance:
He is a moonlight silver pelted wolf, of slim nature. His eyes are purple. His tail is twisted like his Father's, but not as much, while he has battle scars that have yet to fully heal adorning his eye and shoulder.
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Age: Adolescent fox
Rank: Explorer/medic
Backstory: Her dad, Forest, ate poisonous berries and went insane. He killed Indigo's mom, Moon. Forest then abandoned Indigo. However, Indigo got struck by lightning and developed the power to knock somebody out just by aiming a paw at them.
Power: Can knock someone out by pointing at them with a paw See More▼
Color: Deep indigo, with streaks of purple and navy blue (this was caused by the lightning strike). A white star symbol is in between her eyes, which are emerald green.
Extra details: She's strong, clever, and passionate, but she also can be mean sometimes.
I love the story so far! I can really picture it in my mind. You do a great job describing things! :)
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Age: Young Adult Fox
Rank: Sapper (Trap maker and such)
Backstory: Born to a small family below an oak tree within the small Oak forest, he was first out of three children to be born. He grew up doing things he had seen many two-legged creatures doing, using a strange herb that was long and thin, but strong enough to lift himself with enough of the See More▼ herb. He used sticks and other items to build small shelters and odd contraptions before he was sent out into the real world on his own.
Power: No supernatural powers, but he has learned he art of Two-legeed creature construction and trapping.
Color: His fur coat is similar to that of a normal Asian Red Fox, though with what seems to be a black fur mark on the right side of his face that forms a symetrical circular object with ridges in it.
Extras: He uses leaves to carry supplies he would not normally be able to carry, but this tactic makes him easier to track, and easier to catch.
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Name: Cloud (CloudedMoon)
Age : pup
Rank: none yet ( alpha m/f, medic, so on)
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