The Critter Hunt

Yay, I wrote something. It's based on a predator that I heard was in my yard, and it ate 2 of my ducks. ;-;

published on November 22, 20154 reads 3 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 2.

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BEN's eyes fluttered open. "Huh, what happened?" He asked. The boy attempted to sit up straight, but was stopped as a sharp pain shot through his body. BEN looked down to see that he had been wrapped in bandages, and his tunic had been replaced with a drafty gown. From the other room, he could hear gentle sobbing, like a girl crying. "BREE..."
   
Jeff peeked into the room  to see BEN awake. He then walked quickly to BREE and said "BREE, He's alive..." BREE quickly stood up and walked into his room. "BEN, How are you..." She said, surprised that he was alive. "I thought you We're dead!" BEN stared at her, clueless. "I don't even know what happened." BREE shook her head. "You were attacked by the animal. I thought that you were fine, and it had not done much harm, until you started coughing up blood." BEN shook his head. "But... What kind of critter was it?" BREE shook her head again. "We don't know."  Without speaking, she took something out of her pocket. "Is that... Is that...your eye!?" BREE looked at the object in her hand. "God damn it, Jeff!" She said, putting the eye back in the pocket. I wanted to show you this. BREE removed another object from her pocket, a small PokeBall. "Silver gave this to you. It fell out of your pocket when the animal attacked you." BEN remembered the ball now. He pushed the button to open the ball and a PokeMon came out. A Baby Eevee! Both error children smiled at the sight.
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milfs
Who's Sally?
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on November 22, 2015