Would you come after me if I walk away?

Would you come after me if I walk away?

Lilith was a Normal girl, being shy she only had one friend. But weirdly one day she walked away. In this story, you will learn the importance of friendship. And to always "keep your old friends one is silver the other gold.

published on September 09, 201615 reads 6 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Keep dreaming

Once again my friend and I were walking. Dreaming of having the confidence to asked each other's name. I wanted to, but something held me back. Like a person holding onto me. I built up the courage and said "um my name is Lilith what's yours?" "Ariana" she replied. 'Wow' I thought to myself I had done it. Happiness swarmed throughout my body we finally  knew each other's names.
I walked home after school with a skip in my step. A big bright smile planted on my face. I did it!
The sun brightened up and my eyes sparkled.
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spookiness1e
I really like your writing style. Keep up the good work! The only thing you could perhaps do is writing the chapters a bit longer. But except that, it is nicely written and you can describe feelings very well. :)
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Thanks for the feed back, and this story is supposed to have short chapters but I will keep that in mind
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Also thanks for reading and commenting @erudite_nessie
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on September 10, 2016
spookiness1e
Okay :)
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
At least I have one reader
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