Would you come after me if I walk away?

Would you come after me if I walk away?

Lilith was a Normal girl, being shy she only had one friend. But weirdly one day she walked away. In this story, you will learn the importance of friendship. And to always "keep your old friends one is silver the other gold.

published on September 0915 reads 6 readers 5 not completed
Chapter 1.

Hopes in happiness

The wind blew through our hair as we walked in the shade. We didn't talk being shy, but we walked together in silence. It felt nice to have someone there. As we walked others stared on towards us blankly. Many people doubted us but if they took the time to get to know us maybe, just maybe they'll understand.
We walked back to class and waved good by. I sat silently on the mat blankly staring into nothing. I avoided many things in class, like talking or answering questions.
I honestly just sat alone doing nothing, dreaming of who I could be. No one seemed to notice anyway. "Lilith how are you?" Someone was talking to me "good.. I guess" I said more to myself than anything. I didn't feel alone just apart from the rest.
I mean like I wasn't bullied or called names I'm just different. And so far no one understands. Hoping doesn't always work for me, the class always interrupts by talking. I just want to stay curled up in a corner and daydream.
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spookiness1e
I really like your writing style. Keep up the good work! The only thing you could perhaps do is writing the chapters a bit longer. But except that, it is nicely written and you can describe feelings very well.
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Thanks for the feed back, and this story is supposed to have short chapters but I will keep that in mind
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Also thanks for reading and commenting @erudite_nessie
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spookiness1e
Okay
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
At least I have one reader
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