Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

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Summer Camp Story
Chapter 21.

More Missing

The fire flickered on Blaze's pale face as she put her hands onto her hips.
"What just happened?" Jackie, was crying, Maria and Yamilette had their arms around her. Maria looked up.
"Amy called Jackie an alcoholic!" she said in a scratchy voice.
"What?" Blaze was obviously shocked.
"I had brought some water on the trip so I wouldn't have to drink bug juice like everyone else and since i'm the oldest here she..." Jackie sighed, whiping her eyes on a napkin. "I'm sorry, I shouldn't be crying. I just didn't expect it." Yamillete hugged her which she accepted gratefully.
"Is that what everyone else heard?" Blaze asked, she looked around the girls and her eyes landed on Trinty. Now everyone was looking at her. She didn't like being the centre of attention, all the girl's strong personalitys made her feel discluded. "Trinty," Blaze prompted but Trinty couldn't think of what to say. Blaze sighed. "I'm going after Amy. Everyone wait here." She picked up her big flashlight from where Sapphire had set it down. Then she fished in her pocket and pulled out her mobile, checking something on it. "Stay put." She said again. "I'll be right back, and then we're going to have a long discussion on what's going to happen on this overnight." Everyone looked freaked. Trinty suddenly perked up.
"Do you want me to go with you?" She felt guilty, Amy had tried to be nice to her yet she couldn't think of what to say to defuse the situation.
"No. Stay with Rouge." Blaze answered gesturing to Rouge who nodded in response. Blaze flicked on her torch and stomped off into the trees.

"So much for our bonding expirence," Wave groused. She looked to Rouge. "We're all going to get booted, huh?"
"I wouldn't think so, though it's not completely out of the picture."
"It's Amy who should be booted!" Red whispered. Rouge sighed and shrugged.
"Trinty, what exactly did Amy say?" Trinty gulped and sighed.
"'lil Miss 'keep fit' over there chugging'" She whispered not able to make eye contact with anyone.
"So she didn't exactly call Jackie an alcoholic" Rouge muttered.
"We all know what she was implying." Yamilette said loyally still clinging to Jackie.
"Like you guys didn't do anything at all!" Wave suddenly shouted standing up. "Amy and I didn't mention it before, Rouge, but all this NICE people said some really mean things about Amy and me when they foudn out they were going to be in a bunk with us. Amy overheard and cried all the way to the bunk." Everyone fell silent.
"It's true." Maria muttered. "I'm so sorry Wave."
"Me too." Electra sighed. "I was nasty."
"Maybe this is what Vector was talking about." Victoria pitched in. "All the stuff we haven't talked about." That was pure Victoria, Trinty thought. She didin't talk a lot, but when she did, it was worth waiting for. Rouge nodded in agreement. The conversation died. Trinty figured the bunk was waiting for Blaze to come back with Amy. Rouge went to her tent and got the scavenger hunt clipboard. Electra patted Trinty on the bacl before going to talk with Maria, Sapphire and Yamilette. Jackie sat down beside Trinty.
"You notice a lot of things right?" She asked Trinty who nodded shyly. "Had I done anything to upset Amy?"
"You kinda got on her case when she dropped the ketchup on your tomato's at dinner."
"Maybe she was trying to make more ketchup?" Jackie asked trying to make a joke. "Thank you, Trinty." She smiled and went to talk to Red and Lilli.

"Don you think they should be back now?" Jackie asked.
"Maybe something's wrong." Maria spoke up straining her voice. She looked at Rouge who strugged. Trinty frowned. She craned her neck and looked over the lake. A thin layer of fog rised from the water.
"You guys?" She called. "Look at that."Everyone looked towards the lake in silence.
"Just like in Sapphire's story." Yamilette muttered.
"It's just fog!" Wave snapped, but her voice faulted. The campfire flickered and went out. Rouge pulled out a torch from her bag and handed it to Red. The fog on the lake was thicker now.
"This is creeping me out a little." Sapphire admitted.
"Me too." Trinty agreed. An owl hooted. Another answered it.
"Okay, i'm going to see what's going on."
"Please, let me go with you!" Maria said. "I want to say sorry."
"Me too!" Electra said "We need to say sorry." Rouge paused for a moment then nodded.
"Alright, you two come with me, but everyone else, stay here. Under strict orders." Everyone nodded. "Alright, Maria, Electra, with me." Then the three left the camp site.
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ChocolerryPOP
Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
ThatAnimeGirl
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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sapphirethehedgehog
yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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sapphirethehedgehog
:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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Lucky_the_whatever_26
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Why a thank you XD
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ThatAnimeGirl
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
ChocolerryPOP
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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sapphirethehedgehog
You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you x3
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ChocolerryPOP
I am excited to read the rest of it
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice chapter! :3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you! :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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Weiss_Schnee
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sorry! D:
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sapphirethehedgehog
Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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ThatAnimeGirl
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome! :D
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on July 28, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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dogboy
woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
dogboy
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
dogboy
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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ThatAnimeGirl
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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sapphirethehedgehog
It couldddddddddd
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sapphirethehedgehog
Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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Kinnare
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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sapphirethehedgehog
IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Kinnare
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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sapphirethehedgehog
The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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Kinnare
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yeah ^.^U
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on February 12, 2017
Orange.Soda
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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Weiss_Schnee
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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sapphirethehedgehog
But in reality, most likely XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Kinnare
Please update soon Sapphire!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Will do :)
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on January 08, 2017
Orange.Soda
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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sapphirethehedgehog
Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
Orange.Soda
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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Kinnare
Also really great*claps*???
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Kinnare
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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Kinnare
?
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you :3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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ThatAnimeGirl
I really hope lilgro happens..
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Orange.Soda
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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sapphirethehedgehog
Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
What's gonna happen? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
He might be~
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Cropsy coming?
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Weiss_Schnee
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Awesome! :D
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Orange.Soda
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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sapphirethehedgehog
Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
Orange.Soda
I see her doing that, actually...
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
The new chapter is good! :D
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks! X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem X3
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ThatAnimeGirl
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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sapphirethehedgehog
I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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sapphirethehedgehog
I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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ThatAnimeGirl
Wym its getting confusing?
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