Him

Him

Just a story about an emo boy who fell for a not so emo girl, and how the not so emo girl fell for the emo boy.

published on September 15, 2017109 reads 15 readers 77 completed
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Chapter 9.
Stolen

Stolen

Sesa blew out the candles of his cake, which was black and red.
"Awesome." He said, looking over to Sota, who was shaking and gulping.
Sesa raised his eyebrow, then shrugged it off.
Their mom walked in, and Sota started sweating more. Kara had gone to the bathroom to 'freshen up', and that she'd be there ' in a minute' to help.
Sota took a deep breath, then stood up and grabbed a knife.

"Hey, man. Can you cut the cake?" Sesa asks, having a slight feeling of caution about him.
Sota nods, then slowly starts cutting the cake.
Their mom lays her hand on his shoulder, concerned.
"Sota, what's wrong?"
He looks at her, crying silently.
"I-i'm sorry, mum..." says, turning around to face her.
She tilts her head curiously, then asks, "For what?"

He sobs, then says "For this..." as he stabs her again and again.
Sesa hopped up to stop him, punching him in the jaw.
"What the hell, Sota?!? Have you lost it!!?"
Sota sobs, then goes to say something when a smell enters the room, making both boys sleepier as time goes on.
"Wh... what's happening..?" Sesa asks groggy, falling to the floor next to his dying mother.

He heard laughter, then felt himself being pulled out of his house. When he looked up, he saw Kara with a bloody knife in her hand, which was covered with a surgeon's glove.
"Kara...?"

She laughs like it's the first and last time she'll hear a joke.

"Aww, sorry Sesa dear. I had to dispose of Sota so he wouldn't get jealous!~" She says, smiling insanely.
He tried to move, to do something, but he couldn't.

She loaded him into his car, giggling. "Cmon, Sesa. Use your brain! Did you really think I'd let you reject me?! You're crazy! I love you too much to let you go!" She laughed, slamming onto the gas.

That's when it hit him.
She was not only responsible for Macy's death, but at least ten others, along with Sota and Moms.
Now she dare say she loved him?!?
"Kara... you..!" He barely managed to choke out, fighting off sleep for as long as he could.

She looked at him, laying her hand on his.
"You hurt me, Sesa. All I ever did, all I ever wanted to do, was love you. Was be with you. But no... You couldn't accept my love." She says, eyes darkening. "Now, you're all mine, and no one will take you away without dying!"

Sesa was terrified of her.
He didn't want anyone else to die, but he couldn't let her live like this.
Right before he passed out, he said, "I hate you..!" directly in Kara's ear.

She sighed, laying his head in her lap.
"I know you do. But you'll love me eventually." She said, driving to her secrete hiding spot to keep him forever.
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frights_in_hollywood51
wow.just wow. so deep and speechless its that great:D
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xXEmo_KingXx
How so?
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on May 03, 2018
xXEmo_KingXx
Makes sense XD
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on May 02, 2018
frights_in_hollywood51
idk i gusse i like that stuff im not y tho
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on April 29, 2018
paytynn
WTF IS THIS
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on April 02, 2018
The_Mad_Hatress
Wow I love romantic stories, by the way you haven't by chance seen Mirai Nikki?
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xXEmo_KingXx
I fücking love MARAI Nikki
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The_Mad_Hatress
cool, I thought it was cool as well
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on October 04, 2017
SierraMWay
OH MI GOD!!!! CHAPTER 10!!! OMG!! LUV IT!!! <3!! @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Bows*
Please, hold your applause. Naw, I'm kidding, let me have it!
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SierraMWay
lol *huggles* This is great. Addicting. And of course legit asf.
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
No, not another cliffhanger why? @xXEmo_KingXx
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SierraMWay
I dont like the last one. After all shes done just leaving him. NO. Use on of the first 2. This story has become my obsession. You can't stop. Or else, I will hunt you down and kill you.
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xXEmo_KingXx
Lol fry for now
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
sorry lol
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Facepalms*
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
Im a member i think?
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
https://www.qfeast.com/page/BKpMYZ/Stories
Here ya go! This goes to anyone who has suggestions or comments on da stories I do.
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
I am too. My email dont work so i just have to like type a certain site to be able to get on
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
lol
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Cant respond cause I'm technically a phantom account.
Ooo, I'm a phantom ooo
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
PM?
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
I'm sure you'll write more.
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Nope. fact, I feel that the end is close indeed
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
Oh don't worry. You wouldn't try to end the story on behalf of my promise.
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol sorry.
Trust me, I can't be killed that easily. I've been shot, stabbed, poisoned, electrocuted, ran over, but upside the head with more objects than I can count, drowned, ect.
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
oh and BTW dont call me sweety
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
You saying just because I'm little? Just because you are like 6 years older dont mean nothing. Heres something to remember. "It doesn't matter who, all that matters is how you do the deed."
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
XD trust me sweety. Bigger people have tried.
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
Well, there are 3 possible endings.
1. They get together after more tears and forgiveness

2. One, or both, dies

Or See More▼
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
SierraMWay
OMG, must you leave me on a cliffhanger? Why? Now you have me so into this book its not even funny. Luv it as always
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on September 25, 2017
SierraMWay
Oh mi god, Chapter 5 reminds me so much of myself its unbelieveable. I Love It.
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xXEmo_KingXx
And people wonder why I enjoy writing. For me, writing is about reachingbour to someone and saying
Hey, kid. I know how you feel. That's why I'm writing for you.
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xXEmo_KingXx
Yes I am, but I'm about to leave school for work. Sorry
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
PM?
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
You on ur phone?
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on September 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol auto correct failed me ?
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
Oh yea you spelt it wrong thats why lol
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on September 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol shakesphere? Romeo and Juliet?
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
you're 18 holy shyt its a small world!! I know poe not the other guy though. (btw im only 12)
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on September 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol I'm 18 and I've been told I write like dhakedphere or poe
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
If only I could write like this.... lol nah i couldnt
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on September 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Aww anytime!
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
I mentioned you. And it's kinda a thank you.
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on September 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
No, not yet. Why?
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
Did you see my vid I posted that reminded me of you?
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on September 22, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Well, I try to give a voice to those who can't speak. So, in a way, I'm speaking for myself.
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
That's So true! Your writing just says exactly how i feel and what i can't put into words. It's just perfect.
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on September 22, 2017
SierraMWay
This was just Wow. Can I print your stories at so I can read them at home?
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xXEmo_KingXx
Well, since you asked, sure! I don't mind if you ask first. Just make it clear that I wrote them, k?
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SierraMWay
ok Thx @xXEmo_KingXx
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on September 22, 2017
TylerWay
It's great to be able to read your stories again
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xXEmo_KingXx
Aww, I missed you too dude! How was your summer?
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TylerWay
My apologizes, I seem to have drunk two Cafe Mocha's from starbucks, ate some chocolate, some candy, and my friend's soda
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol so perky
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
Yay!
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol just did
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
That is a great story to tell
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol I know
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
Oh wow!
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Yeah, I know. I even had one offer to arrange a marriage between me and their niece. Don't get me wrong, she was a nice girl, I just wasn't interested
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
I am sure that people you helped appreciated it too
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Shrugs*
It was a mess here. I'm just happy I helped out someone who needed it.
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
*claps* So proud!
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Mostly helping after the hurricane. But I also did a bit of security work here and there.
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
What work was it?
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
Lol
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
JKJK it's a Ford truck.
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on September 20, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Bleh, I had to work. All summer to get my BRAND NEW LAMBORGHINI
???
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on September 20, 2017
TylerWay
Mine was great! Though I couldn't get on here during the summer. How about yours?
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SierraMWay
aww, s'cute. You should publish and sell your books. Lots of kids would love them.
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xXEmo_KingXx
I would, but a lot of my books end in tragedy.
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SierraMWay
I prefer those kind instead of fairy tales
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on September 20, 2017
SierraMWay
Good Job! I feel as if I'm in the story and TBH it relates to me. I'm like Kara I've had a crush on this guy ever since I met him, but I don't know if he likes me.
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xXEmo_KingXx
We'll see how it happens.
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