Alice in Wonderland?

Alice goes mad in the real world, and ends up going to Wonderland once more, only to realize that Wonderland is anything but full of magic

published on December 29, 201568 reads 21 readers 61 not completed
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Alice in Wonderland?
Chapter 4.

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The smell of blood, mold, and rotten wood hit my nose the moment I sat down in a rotting chair, spider webs covered the large table as well as the chairs. I made sure not to lean back or forward. "HAVE SOME TEA!" Someone shouted as a tea cup was slammed into my skull. I closed my eyes and took a regretful deep breath. I rubbed my head and looked down at the shattered tea cup. I scrunched my eyebrows together as I felt something warm and thick run down my forehead. I brought my hand up and lightly touched my head, bringing my fingers down to my line of vision.
Blood. "Hehheuhuhuhehehuhu." The voice said again, I looked up. A rabbit with grey fur..well..whats left of the fur. It's fur was in small patches as the rest of him was nothing but bloody patches of..skin? I can not tell. It's left rib-cage was covered with mechanics, metal ribs with gears. One of it's ears was missing along with an eye. All replaced with blots, gears, metal scraps, and screws. I even spotted a card shoved in it's missing ear as well as it's jacket and ribs.
I pressed my lips together as the chair it was sitting in broke, causing him to fall. "PFFT HAHAHAHA!" Another voice shouted, I looked up, a man slapped his hand on the table over and over. The man had big poffy red hair, with cards and tea cups stuck in it. He wore make up, but it was so smuged and water damaged, I couldn't tell what it was supposed to be. One of his eyes was replaced with a strange looking gear, it turned every now and then. His smile was cut open, showing some missing teeth and some sharpened ones. His clothing was ripped, shredded even, water damaged, which I am now thinking is tea, and so dirty, that every movement he did made a strange sound of wrinkling clothes and dust flies everywhere.
I tilted my head as he suddenly stopped laughing and looked at me. "Mmmyyy myyy look at thisss." He cooed, I looked around, the cat was gone. I sighed and looked back at the strange man. I covered my mouth before I could scream. He was right in front of me. "Fuhuhuhuhuhahahaha! You see er face!?" The rabbit shouted as he threw a moldy piece of bread at the man. He was so close I could smell the blood and tea in his breath.
He tried to frown, but his cuts made it hard. ".....ALICE!" He shouted as he slammed his hand on my head. "LONG TIME NO SEE!" He shouted as he laughed and rolled off the table. "Hehehuhu." Their laughs were so strange. I looked down at him, he was holding on to his bloody stomach as he laughed. "Why are you all so bloody?" I asked softly, I didn't raise my voice over him. He hopped up and held out a hand..well...mechanic arm. His eye gear turned. "WE FOUGHT CAN'T YA TELL?!" He asked, I blinked. Battle? That explains a lot. The rabbit laughed and banged his head on the table over and over. The man laughed as he ripped a tea cup from his hair and threw it at the rabbit, hitting him in the head.
"SHE WON'T GET IT HATTER! Hehehhuhhuhehehehuhuh" The rabbit laughed as it took the shattered tea cup and shoved it in its mouth. "NEEDS SUGAR!" It snatched a spoon and stopped moving. "...Spoon." It said, entranced in the object. Hatter laughed as he threw a piece of bread at the rabbit. "HAVE SOME BREAD WITH IT!" He shouted, the rabbit laughed, bits and pieces of the tea cup falling out of its mouth, covered in blood as blood covered its teeth and spilled out of its mouth. "Ohh seem's like you've become friends." A voice cooed, I turned my head. The cat smiled more as he turned upside down in mid air.
"CHESHIRE!" Hatter shouted, the rabbit giggled and threw a fork at the cat. Cheshire easily dodged it and chuckled."Well thrown." Cheshire said as he grabbed an unshattered cup and moved the tea around, some splashing out of the cup and onto the cloth. The tea was reddish....it's not tea..it's blood. I looked at Hatter, he laughed as he saw my reaction. "OH LITTLE ALICE HERE IS SCARED!!" He shouted as his eye gear turned, the rabbit laughed loudly as it slammed its skull in the table again, this time getting it's teeth stuck in the wood. I bit my bottom lip and took a deep breath as I heard the crunching sound of vain's popping. I watched as the rabbit moved his head side to side, getting his teeth loose, well, more like removing its teeth. It shot it's head back after a while, I covered my mouth as I saw a stream of blood follow his head back. I looked at the two cracked teeth in the table and looked at the rabbit.
He laughed, along with everyone else.
These people..these THINGS...are mad.
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Comments (61)

SmolRaccoons
Hm so I was reading this and then I thought to myself you should update this oh and I'm going to fix some grammatical errors
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simple_sheep
And are you Drocell now? Lololol
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SmolRaccoons
XD YES
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
And Drocell is cute so there is no downside XD
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
I'm saying fück cause I don't wanna be Drocell
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
Nope I made it on time
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Did you miss the bus mate?
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Sucks you're Drocell now
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
No I just say that sometimes
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Danke
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
Cannibalistic.Sweets
I <3 it!!!!! XD
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simple_sheep
Heheh yay! X3
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on March 18, 2016
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on March 18, 2016
SmolRaccoons
Yo bitch you should update this or I will slap you at school
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SmolRaccoons
Yay ^.^
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on March 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Oh my...alright I'll update it
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on March 03, 2016
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on March 03, 2016
TsumikiMiniwa
KEEP GOING!!! It's AMAZING!!
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simple_sheep
Aw thanks! alright! X3
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on January 22, 2016
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on January 22, 2016
breann.west.5
I love this!! Please continue!
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simple_sheep
I messed up XD I tried fixing the title and it posted before I finished it
Its done now XDXDXD
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on January 09, 2016
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on January 09, 2016
Blank_Dream
Nice new chapter! It's freaking amazing! Keep goin'!
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simple_sheep
Aw thanks! X3
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Blank_Dream
You're welcome!
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on December 30, 2015
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SmolRaccoons
This story is.....Fuckking awesome!Well technically its just currently a chapter....But its still great :D
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simple_sheep
Aw thanks Ciel!
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Blank_Dream
*squints* The line between those is blurry...
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
D: D: D: D: D: D:
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
He didn't hate him he just thought he was a brat with anger issues
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
(XD meant down point.)
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
Johnathon was a good llama.....who hated Alois. His only doenpoint.
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
Johnathon never liked you though
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
May Johnathon rest in pieces...I MEAN PEACE
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
Alois do you have any words to say about Johnathon
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
RIP, Johnathon. *waves at his grave with a handkerchief*
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
His name was Johnathon and he will be missed dearly
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
XD poor llama
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
@AlliceTeea
Poor llama....
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
Don't laugh llama death is a very serious matter!!!!
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
Pffft HAHAHA
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
It would have gotten six out of five but a llama got hit by a car
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
XD That works X3
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
It gets five out of five llamas
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
Of cores! But is it really that good?
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
You know Alice in Wonderland is one of my many obsessions
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Blank_Dream
Can you make another chapter? This is really good, and you should make more.
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simple_sheep
Aw thank you!!
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Blank_Dream
Yay!
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
Alright :D
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
You're welcome. But I'm serious, though. You should continue it.
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on December 30, 2015
Orange.Soda
ITS FUKN BEAUTIFUL!
I want moar! =0
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Orange.Soda
I love it.xd
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Orange.Soda
My first chapter is doooone! ^_^
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
Alright have fun! X3
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on December 29, 2015
Orange.Soda
XD I would actually do that, too.
I'm going to work on mine. Soooo =/
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
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on December 29, 2015
Orange.Soda
The part she asks 20 questions. X3
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
X3 what's the best part so far?
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
Aw really? X3
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