Alice in Wonderland?

Alice goes mad in the real world, and ends up going to Wonderland once more, only to realize that Wonderland is anything but full of magic

published on December 29, 201568 reads 21 readers 61 not completed
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Alice in Wonderland?
Chapter 3.

Cheshire Cat and Hell?

"Hm well look at whom we have here." A voiced purred. I slowly opened my eyes and gasped. A cat hovered above of me...but it didn't look like a cat. It was black with a blue design, it was as skinny as a cat that hasn't eaten in about three weeks. Its ribs showed like a new tattoo, but its fur was puffy....in some places. In other places the fur was missing. It's tail was long and curled and swished around many times. It's eye was a wide and disgusting yellow with a reddish tint with its pupils narrowed in the tiniest of slits as for its other eye, long gone.
One of its ears were ripped and hanging down, clinging for dear life by a small piece of skin. But the most disturbing thing about it was its smile. Its smile reached its ears showing its sharp bloody teeth. I blinked a few rimes, making it smile more and its eyes narrow more..if that were even possible.
We stayed like that for a few minutes,until it finally blinked. "You must be...terrified." It purred again as it brought it's boney paw to my cheek. Its claws were sharp enough to cut through anything. I blinked and sat up. I scooched away from him and looked around. He looked at me with his strangely wide eyes and chuckled.
I looked back at him and tilted my head. "Where am I?" I asked and widened my eyes at the sound of my voice. It sounded so strange. It chuckled again and glided over to me. It spun upside down and blinked. "Why...you my dear..are in what's left of Wonderland." It said, I looked at its side. A large scratch laid on its side, blood dripped on the ground.
"You are hurt." I said, it's eyes darted to its side than back to me. "Why yes, I am." It purred. I immediately ripped a part of my dress and snatched it out of the air. He narrowed his eyes as I placed him on my lap and wrapped up his cut. I didn't even bother asking what happened, nor did I want to know about the beast that did this. A deep rumbling noise was heard from the bottom of his throat as I gently stroked him.
Maybe this, Wonderland, wasn't that bad...I mean..I found a nice cat, and maybe a new friend.
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SmolRaccoons
Hm so I was reading this and then I thought to myself you should update this oh and I'm going to fix some grammatical errors
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simple_sheep
And are you Drocell now? Lololol
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SmolRaccoons
XD YES
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
And Drocell is cute so there is no downside XD
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
I'm saying fück cause I don't wanna be Drocell
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
Nope I made it on time
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Did you miss the bus mate?
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Sucks you're Drocell now
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on November 03, 2016
SmolRaccoons
No I just say that sometimes
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Danke
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
Cannibalistic.Sweets
I <3 it!!!!! XD
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simple_sheep
Heheh yay! X3
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on March 18, 2016
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on March 18, 2016
SmolRaccoons
Yo bitch you should update this or I will slap you at school
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SmolRaccoons
Yay ^.^
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on March 03, 2016
simple_sheep
Oh my...alright I'll update it
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on March 03, 2016
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on March 03, 2016
TsumikiMiniwa
KEEP GOING!!! It's AMAZING!!
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simple_sheep
Aw thanks! alright! X3
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on January 22, 2016
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on January 22, 2016
breann.west.5
I love this!! Please continue!
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simple_sheep
I messed up XD I tried fixing the title and it posted before I finished it
Its done now XDXDXD
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Blank_Dream
Nice new chapter! It's freaking amazing! Keep goin'!
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simple_sheep
Aw thanks! X3
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Blank_Dream
You're welcome!
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on December 30, 2015
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SmolRaccoons
This story is.....Fuckking awesome!Well technically its just currently a chapter....But its still great :D
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simple_sheep
Aw thanks Ciel!
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Blank_Dream
*squints* The line between those is blurry...
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
D: D: D: D: D: D:
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
He didn't hate him he just thought he was a brat with anger issues
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
(XD meant down point.)
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
Johnathon was a good llama.....who hated Alois. His only doenpoint.
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
Johnathon never liked you though
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
May Johnathon rest in pieces...I MEAN PEACE
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
Alois do you have any words to say about Johnathon
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
RIP, Johnathon. *waves at his grave with a handkerchief*
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
His name was Johnathon and he will be missed dearly
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
XD poor llama
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
@AlliceTeea
Poor llama....
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
Don't laugh llama death is a very serious matter!!!!
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
Pffft HAHAHA
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
It would have gotten six out of five but a llama got hit by a car
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
XD That works X3
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
It gets five out of five llamas
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
Of cores! But is it really that good?
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on December 30, 2015
SmolRaccoons
You know Alice in Wonderland is one of my many obsessions
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Blank_Dream
Can you make another chapter? This is really good, and you should make more.
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simple_sheep
Aw thank you!!
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Blank_Dream
Yay!
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on December 30, 2015
simple_sheep
Alright :D
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on December 30, 2015
Blank_Dream
You're welcome. But I'm serious, though. You should continue it.
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Orange.Soda
ITS FUKN BEAUTIFUL!
I want moar! =0
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Orange.Soda
I love it.xd
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Orange.Soda
My first chapter is doooone! ^_^
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
Alright have fun! X3
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on December 29, 2015
Orange.Soda
XD I would actually do that, too.
I'm going to work on mine. Soooo =/
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
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on December 29, 2015
Orange.Soda
The part she asks 20 questions. X3
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
X3 what's the best part so far?
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
simple_sheep
Aw really? X3
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