Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

This is the story of a young girl who has always been interested in the stars of our night sky. She longs to find out what is written in the stars and she will not stop until she does. Her best friends help her in this journey of discovery.

published on February 23, 201723 reads 4 readers 22 not completed
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Chapter 7.

Chapter Seven

A few years passed and me and Surge were closer than we ever were. Surge had taken me out on numerous dates and helped me find a job. I was now working full time in a restaurant serving the food. It wasn’t much but it paid the rent and allowed me to buy some nice clothes. Sapphire was also in a job now. She was an accountant. Sapphire was finding the job stressful but was enjoying it immensely.

I was just coming out of work and saw that Surge was waiting for me. I ran over to him and as he saw me, he opened his arms up and I threw myself into them.

“How was work princess?” He asked kissing both of my cheeks at least twenty times making me blush madly.

“Mayhem, we had a restaurant critic come in today and I nearly tripped over. The table cloths are way too long.” I looked up as I heard Surge chuckle. “What’s so funny?”

“Oh nothing, just your ranting. It’s cute” He bent down and kissed the end of my nose, making me blush. He took my hand and started walking us home. We talked about how our days had gone and how much we had missed each other.

“Oh, can we go on a walk tonight Maria?”

“Yeah of course Surge.”

“Good, because I uh… need to ask you something… Important…” What could he possibly want to ask? He is happy with me isn’t he? I mean, his reaction when I came out from work didn’t suggest that he wasn’t happy with me…

Night-time came and Surge came to pick me up as normal but something wasn’t right, he seemed nervous and fidgety. This wasn’t like him, what he wanted to ask must have been bugging him for quite a while. We walked to the park like usual and I sat on the edge of the fountain, looking up at the stars. They seemed a lot brighter than usual. Something was definitely up.

“Maria… Can I ask you something?” I looked down at him and smiled.

“Of course Honey, what’s wrong?” Surge then got down onto one knee and pulled out a black box. I gasped. Was he doing what I think he was doing?!

“Maria, Will you marry me?”
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Comments (22)

Weiss_Schnee
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CAN I SHIP THESE TWO NOW?!?!?!
*squealing so much*
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ThatAnimeGirl
*giggles*
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on March 10, 2017
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on March 10, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
Oh man you better take shelter from Sapph!!!
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ThatAnimeGirl
I better?
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ThatAnimeGirl
*screams and runs into a bush, leaving my tail hanging out*
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on February 24, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
She wanted Surge and now he asked you out...
HIDE WOMAN!!!
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
AWWWWW WE ROOMIES
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sapphirethehedgehog
I LOVE IT (thoughsurgeismine >:3 le grrr) XD Seriously though this is really well written, I can imagine why no one is hiring Sapphire.

Interviewer: So, tell me about yourself
Sapphire: Well, I'm- IS THAT A SQUIRREL?!
Interviewer: Sapphire-
Sapphire: LOOK AT ITS TAIL See More▼
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yea!! and omg xD
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on February 24, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
XD omg Sapph I was like that with the red squirrel news this morning! :D
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on February 24, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Do you like it though?
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on February 23, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
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on February 23, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
Ha ha!
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on February 23, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
O.o I meant to put *is wait I'll change that XD sorry!!
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on February 23, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
What do you mean "Isnt really well written"?!
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on February 23, 2017
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ThatAnimeGirl
WE AREEE!!
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Weiss_Schnee
Already deep, daaaaamn!!!
You know how to hit emotions better than I can!
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ThatAnimeGirl
Thanks... :">
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ThatAnimeGirl
My English teacher loves it. I'm writing it In word and then C&Ping it. I didn't tell her it was going on here, but we had do to a creative writing piece for a mini assessment and I asked if I could carry this on, she asked what it was about and then said I could do this. I asked her to read over it and she loves it
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on February 23, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
Read it, nice job :)
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on February 23, 2017
ThatAnimeGirl
wow... next chapter will be up in a second ^^
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on February 23, 2017
Weiss_Schnee
It's true, though. I normally have to force it out.
With you it's natural.
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