Connecting stars

Connecting stars

Love makes people happy & cherished but not for all. The story of Chizu, who had feelings for her classmate Makoto since Elementary Music Festival. To meet him again & to remind him of his promise to sing again one day together, she joins his highschool & gets struck in a love triangle with Michiko . Get ready for a rollercoater of feelings and Experience Jealousy, Love, Hatred & lies, the pain of one sided love.

published on January 29, 201899 reads 19 readers 20 completed
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Chapter 4.
Third person

Third person

Middle School was finally over. I was aldready  missing my special friends and especially Hana
Hana is like my only friend in middle school. She was kind, sweet & always defended me
I was so fortunate to have at least one true friend. She's not like any other fake friend who just praises you & talks bad behind your back. I hate those type of girls
And talk about devil, when I was entered into my new high school & moving towards cafeteria I saw  a bunch of girls surrounding someone .
All those girls were laughing & saying
"Jade is amazing."
"Oh Jade"
"Ah Jade"
"Jade!!"
All I heard was "Jade"
Who was that..I didn't know.
Then I looked closely and saw a Honey brown hair girl , with curls, Wearing a dress full of white laces. She was like some ojou they show in Anime
I thought she'd be the same with Short tempered personality, Proud of herself & Sadistic

So I thought better stay away from her...


Then I went inside the cafe & was carrying strawberry milkshake & chocolate waffles. I was so hungry that I bought five or six plates
I tripped on the floor & the whole milkshake was spilled on the floor. My dress had some stains &  I was embarrassed to get up. Everybody was staring at me. I looked down and was trying to get up.
I saw a girl with silky purple died hair giving me hand to get up
She looked like Fashionable athelete
She gave me a smile & said "take my hand"
I felt a little bit shy and happy seeing that somebody is helping me

Then  I walked towards and bent and repeated thank you for five times
"Ah that's fine" she said
"You look Cute" she giggled
Nobody except my parents said that to me till now
Hana said that before but next she would be like "Just kidding"
But this girl hasn't said anything like that
I asked "Seriously? Ah I know you must be kid-"
"no . It's not a joke" she said "I am Michiko you can call me whatever you like. "  She flipped her hair
"Oh okay. I'll call you Michi then " I gave her a bright smile
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Belle_Delphine
Frickin wow.
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orangeade
rlly buddd
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< 3
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Belle_Delphine
Pffttt sure
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on October 03, 2018
orangeade
nahh
my spelling especially in here suck too horribly
imma read your stories
definitely better than mine
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on October 03, 2018
Belle_Delphine
How dare you be a more talented writer than me?
My story suck dicc~
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on October 03, 2018
orangeade
omg
i'm so sorry
I literally drenched my key board writing this
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on October 03, 2018
Belle_Delphine
I actually teared up a lil
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on October 03, 2018
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on October 03, 2018
orangeade
this has so many spelling errors uhh . Well it was 13 year old writing this then lol
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on September 21, 2018
faceme
Awesome story!
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orangeade
tqsm! glad you liked it!
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Orange.Soda
THIS MADE ME CRY AT 7 AM I HOPE YOU KNOW THAT
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orangeade
i'm so sorry
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orangeade
Thanks for reading. ^^
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on February 01, 2018
Orange.Soda
It’s really good though!
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on February 01, 2018
A.Good.Floofy.Bean
I'm only on chapter 3 and I already love it!:D
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orangeade
Tysm <3 :3 stay tuned and don't forget to rate :)
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orangeade
Glad you liked it <3
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on January 29, 2018
orangeade
Oh thank you ?
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on January 29, 2018
A.Good.Floofy.Bean
I gave you five stars my dude!
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orangeade
plese write your views on the story here ^^
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