The Boss and the Demigod [Sephy x Amy]

The Boss and the Demigod [Sephy x Amy]

Amy, Daughter of Hades, feels broken after her brother's death. A member of a band invites her to stay with him while she recuperates. Hilarity and dorkiness ensues.

published on March 1034 reads 20 readers 25 not completed
Chapter 1.

Important Author's Note

I'm just going to warn you now, I've never been exposed to Final Fantasy or any other games Sephiroth is in. His personality in this is based off a music video by a band called Big Bad Bosses, which is a parody of a boy band consisting of four major villains of well-known game franchises.

Sephy's personality will likely be nothing like in-game Sephiroth's. If you're expecting them to be the same, re-read this chapter.

Locations described in this story are very rarely going to be actual places. They're how I imagine they would be. If you expect everything to be perfectly canon, too bad. They're not going to be.

It's going to be the same for any characters from any of the video games. They'll be based totally on the music video.

And finally, this IS a crossover involving the Percy Jackson series and the band, so try to at least be a little informed of both before reading. I'll do my best to explain some concepts, but I'm not very good at that, so be prepared.

If you see words inside {these symbols} they are meant to be sung. Normally they'd be in italics, but that's not currently possible on Qfeast.

Words between apostrophes are a character's thoughts.

One more thing: this story will have very little plot and will mostly just be a series of oneshots, twoshots and sometimes threeshots, so it's always open for requests!

Now that that's done, welcome! I hope you enjoy the story!
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Caddette
No Problem! I'll be looking forward to seeing you improve further as well as make more works!
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Kanya888
Thanks! 😊
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on March 22
Caddette
Eli is maximum level of Chode rn
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Kanya888
I just want him to leave me alone.
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Kanya888
Thanks : )
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on March 22
Caddette
Yeah well! Just keep writing, and don't mind him.
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Caddette
What made you think this was a good idea?

I mean, it's literate, I guess but just, why?
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Kanya888
Hey, um, could you tell me some of the run-on sentences? If they're from the point when Amy is thinking, that's just her thought process, but I have a feeling there are others.
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Kanya888
Yeah, I'll PM you in just a sec.
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on March 22
Caddette
Also! Do you have any way to PM you? I have to ask you a question, but I don't really want it in the open for CERTAIN people to see.
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on March 22
Kanya888
Exactly.
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Caddette
Yeah. I usually don't take those to heart, as they aren't giving any valid reasons to criticism.
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Kanya888
I am ehen there's actually specific things a person says are wrong. Unlike when someone (cough eli cough) says to write better.
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Caddette
Alright. I'll write the list shortly. I'm glad you're willing to take criticism.
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Kanya888
Okay, thanks! I'm making a second chapter right now so I'd like to try and fix things...
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Caddette
I'm a bit busy right now. But when I have to chance, I'll read through them and compile a list.
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Kanya888
Um...I thought it'd be fun?
I swear to God if you're Eli...
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Kanya888
I don't really care at this point.
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Zalnak
Actually your talking to Jayce this is me Eli
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Kanya888
Okay, thanks!

But technically, this is really a different character who's just a flirty version of Sephiroth. Someone apparently thought it'd be funny.
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Caddette
Alright. That's fair enough. I understand. Though, I do recommend you break your habit of run on sentences, I'd proofread alot and look for mistakes or repetition to make your stories more clean.

I'd also recommend in a kind advice that you be careful on which characters you write about without knowledge, as there's alot of people that would be very insulted See More▼
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Kanya888
Eli's this guy I know who's hell-bent on messing with my head.

I'm sorry it's bad, I'm kinda new at writing and I mostly just wanted to get it done so I could do other things. But see, run-on sentences are something I do a lot and it's kind of a habit...
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Caddette
Eli? I'm not entirely sure who that is? I'm guessing someone else who complains about these stories?

Overall, I'm not trying to be too rude. My constructive criticism is that it's very poorly written overall, tons of run on sentences and repetition in words, and though I can't fault the Sephiroth being OOC due to it not being the actual character Sephiroth, See More▼
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Cory_the_Overlord
Well. Good thing that author's note was there.
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Kanya888
..?
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