Glitchy BREE

Glitchy BREE

I rewrote it again, this time adding more details. I have a better backstory and I have made Dante a bit more cruel.

published on October 04, 201535 reads 21 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 2.

The Glitch...

  Dante lay down in his bed. "A perfect day of torturing the ZeldaTard", he said as if he was pleased with himself. Just before he was asleep, he heard something; "I came back..." it seemed to be saying. Then, he looked at where the sound was coming from. My computer. I turned it on, shaking with fear. He recognized the face on the screen. "You! The ZeldaTard!" Dante screamed. Bree said nothing. She simply opened the game, Agar.io. He began to play, but only stayed alive for about 5 minutes. Then He heard Bree again. "Game over..."
(Bree POV)
   I looked at the awestruck boy. Then I thought, "You beat me, you stabbed me, and you finally drowned me.  Then, pulling myself out of the screen, I walked over to him, and made my revenge; I dug my claws into his back as he yelled in pain. The sound of tearing flesh and ripping muscle were heard over his screams as I dragged my claws over his now bare back. Blood oozed from the scratches. I knew it was wrong, but he brought himself the fate. I used my fire and burned him. The blood sizzles and I could smell cooking human. If this is my fate, I must just go with it. Then, I headed back to Cyberspace to find my next victim...
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All_hail_Melon_King
Guys...I guess I could say a quote:

"Never ever mess with Zelda people"
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on June 17, 2016