Friendship or more? (Niall Horan Love Story)

Friendship or more? (Niall Horan Love Story)

The title tells all. I'm going to try to make this very suspenseful, and I am apologizing in advance if I fail miserably. This is dedicated to my friend, officalmrshoran. I hope you like it.

published on March 20, 2013248 reads 37 readers 19 not completed
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Chapter 2.
Louis Finds Out

Louis Finds Out

After losing five games in a row, I decided to take a break. I walked into the kitchen and started to make a sandwich. Then I heard my phone go off. I froze for a few seconds, recognizing the ringtone, then recovered and answered carefully. It was my ex-boyfriend, Tom.
"WHERE ARE YOU?!" he screamed into the phone. I jumped and took a deep breath, then answered. "I'm with my family, Tom."
I heard Tom's now-familiar growling that told me he was about to punch something, and then the other side of the phone became eerily quiet. I waited for a few seconds then quietly asked, "Tom? Are... Are you okay?"
"I can not believe that you really meant that." Tom said in a calm voice that scared the crap out of me. I gulped and tried to sound indifferent. "Well, I did. And I mean this, too: I do not want to hear from you, or see you, ever again. Okay?"
"Oh, you'll see me again, baby. You're going to hear from me, too. Until then, love you, and good-bye." Tom's tone of voice made me start to shake in fear, and I was going to retort, but he hung up before I could.
I took a deep breath, hoping it would calm my nerves, and closed my phone. Putting it back into my pocket, I turned towards the door, only to see Louis standing there, a strange look in his eyes.
"Who was that?" He sounded normal, but after being with Tom for five months, I knew better than to assume that he was okay. I sat down at the table and glanced at him before gazing at my hands, which were on my lap, and quietly said, "My ex."
I heard Louis shift, and when I looked up, he was sitting across from me and gazing at me with sadness in his eyes.
"You mean Tom? Why did you two break up? I mean, you guys seemed so happy the last time I saw you." He sounded a little confused, and I smiled sadly. "I'm sorry that you didn't know this, but that was an act. In reality, he was cheating on me with four other girls. When I found out, we got into a huge fight and..." I took a deep, shaky breath and continued. "He hit me."
Louis gasped. "Are you okay?"
I smiled at his concern. "Yes, I'm fine. After that, I told him that I was leaving him, and he... he went crazy. So I ran away from him and ended up at Zayn's house. He took me in, swore that he would make sure that Tom couldn't get to me, and we came here. That's about it."
Louis nodded along, then smiled at me. "Well, it's good that you went to Zayn. We can protect you from any crazy ex-boyfriends you end up with."
I laughed at his hero pose, then stood up and sighed as I heard some yelling from the living room. "Well, sounds like Niall used another cheat code." Louis said, smirking.
I looked at him. "You gave it to him, didn't you?" Louis' smirk got wider. "Maybe, maybe not." I shook my head and walked into the living room to stop Zayn and Niall from getting into a catfight.
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Emoshadowqueen
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE
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on November 19, 2020
MarichatPuns
Only 90's kids will remember binch
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on May 05, 2019
EvilAngel1490
If you tell me how I can update the story with the website's new layout, then I'll be able to.
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on November 04, 2013
JKRowling
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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on November 04, 2013
JKRowling
Please make more like this weekend. I'm dying here without your story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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on October 12, 2013
JKRowling
Make more
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on October 11, 2013
JKRowling
that was awesome. cant wait for more. Please tell me you are making more
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on September 26, 2013
ChokolatLover
I loved it! Better then all those fan fics! Could u pls write more? It's really great and I can't wait for more!
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on August 01, 2013
music.lover99
I messed up Zayn's hair :D
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on May 14, 2013
Beauty784
I like the new chapter! Please right more! ;)
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on May 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Good story :) WRITE MORE PLEASE!!
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on May 11, 2013
EvilAngel1490
Sure!
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on April 23, 2013
Beauty784
AmaZAYN! :)
I wrote a fanfic too, maybe you can check it out later?
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on April 23, 2013
kellygirl2
cool!
probably the best 1d story here
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on April 22, 2013
music.lover99
Sorry i love it
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on April 15, 2013
EvilAngel1490
Sorry if the second chapter sucks a little, it would have been better, but SOMEONE (zaynmalikssister) was pushing me to finish it.
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on April 12, 2013
music.lover99
Yay me its my fanfic she made me
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on April 03, 2013
GONETOOLATE
It's a really great story. Honestly I was expecting a fanfic to be like all of the others, boring, unoriginal, and totally annoying. But it was written very well and interesting. I wasn't bored at all and exploring an alternate like reality is always fun. I don't approve of being overly obsessed with a group/person. So If this is like a stalker obsession stemmed See More▼
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on March 21, 2013
catesonskates
Nice! Great story!
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on March 20, 2013