BEN VS. JEFF

BEN VS. JEFF

WHO WILL WIN??!! The fight started on a comment then they started fighting over at my house. I'll explain in this read, enjoy. :)

published on February 06, 2013134 reads 86 readers 22 completed
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Chapter 2.

Smarts or Stabbs

So the next thing that happened was a SHOCKER! They were both fighting, I could tell Jeff was more into it than Ben. Ben was thinking; again, I could tell. He was sword fighting, losing, and dodging the outcome. BUT FOR WHAT!?!? I thought intensely. Ben dodged again and ran out the door as I believe he grabbed something. Once you run out the back you're always greeted by my trampoline. He ran out the back. He leaped under it AS JEFF GAINED ON HIM!!! My trampoline was broken at the time so their was a GIANT hole on the side that would about fit Ben or I. He seemed to be heading for it. He climbed in with his knife at hand. BEN BARELY SLIPPED IN AS JEFF WAS RIGHT BEHIND HIM!!! Jeff knifed the hole making it bigger!! Ben was at the other side as Jeff jumped in. Ben started to jump. I was confused of course until I realized what Ben had grabbed. He had a little bottle of soapy WATER!! My mom had been getting ready yesterday to clean for today. Ben was there and I guess he remembered the soap. Ben had also been there when the trampoline ripped. Ben slowly poured the soapy water and then, gaining speed, began to SLOSH IT EVERYWHERE!! He then jumped causing Jeff to slip and drop his knife. Ben laughed at this as he once again grabbed Jeffs knife. He looked up at the trampoline as Jeff struggled. Ben got down and I knew what he was going to do. He started running around the trampoline, cutting the circumference of the circle. He only half-way did it on each side. It slowly teared at every moment. The pressure of Jeffs wait, the circumference cut, and soap caused Ben to laugh. Jeff didn't know what was going on as he struggled to his feet on the wet, soapy, destroyed trampoline. Ben laughed again. The trampoline ripped and quickly made Jeff lose his ground once again. The trampoline closed in as Ben watched his plan take action. Jeff fell on his back, the trampoline fell on Jeff and the springs of the trampoline went everywhere like BULLETS!! I ducked but Ben knew what he was doing. Then all the noise stopped. Jeff jumped out of the ruble obviously mad at Ben who planned it all out in front of him. Ben smiled as the final spring came out of no where. It hit Jeff in the head. Jeff cursed at his fustration of Ben. He then grabbed the knife out of Bens hand and stabbed him in the back. They both tied at this, Ben with many stab wounds and cuts and Jeff with the humilation of Bens plan and the ache in his head.
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Comments (22)

Kssnipergirl2002
BEN WILL WIN!!
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on August 16, 2019
KylieTheKiller
?loved the story! Can u make another one but some other people fight like uh....Slendy and Jack? Idk.
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on August 03, 2017
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
GO JEFF!! (I couldn't stop giggling at this, don't ask why I just was.)
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on January 08, 2016
Stardancer
XD
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on June 19, 2015
EverymanHABIT
Intense... Very intense... Lol, I don't ship JeffXBen. I don't do that Yaoi crap. But this fight was awesome!
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KylieTheKiller
Ben x Jeff is dumb. I don't really ship any creepypasta yet. The first thing I started shipping was Fnaf and I started shipping that a VERY long time ago.
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KylieTheKiller
But I do have a Creepypasta OC and some OCs for Fnaf also
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
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on April 26, 2014
NicoleDrowned
Ben*
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on March 23, 2014
NicoleDrowned
OMG *Cries for ben* I wish I could hug be right now <3 <3
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on March 23, 2014
LexiCha
Lol THANKEHS XD
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on October 17, 2013
creepypastagirl211
I love the first chapter! XD XD XD!!!! *starts laughing*
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on October 12, 2013
Mary_chan
I love jeff :3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 so much * rambles about how much i love him*
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on July 03, 2013
LexiCha
LOLLOLLOLLOL xD OMG that tis be HILARIOUS.. But I don't ship it .-. Just.. NO LOLLOLLOL
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on June 30, 2013
Icekiller46
Lots of videos on youtube people think Me and Ben are in a relationship..Oh god.. :-&
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breann.west.5
Same. On here, there is an account called "BreannDrowned."I kinda like it :">
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on October 09, 2015
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on June 30, 2013
LexiCha
Hehe. :) Twist at the end.
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on June 01, 2013
LexiCha
Thank ya. :)
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on March 07, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Poor humiliated Jeff and wounded Ben!!!! =]
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on March 05, 2013
LexiCha
PLEASE COMMENT PPL!!!
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on February 27, 2013
LexiCha
lol. Thanks. :)
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on February 09, 2013
LexiCha
PPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEEE COMMENT AND RATE!!!! :3
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on February 06, 2013
LexiCha
Lexi: Yah. I know. Ben is REALLY smart but Jeff's REALLY strong. :)
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on February 06, 2013