Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014235 reads 24 readers 35 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue

Water clouded Ferone's eyes, he felt himself being dragged by the current of water, rays of light beamed down on him, it felt as if that was the last he was going to see. He held out his paws in front of him, they were merely silhouettes in the darkness of the stream.

He heard mocking laughing and gloating as if Ferone had just lost the battle of his life. "Given up - cub?" The same voice taunted. The words were a blur in his ears, but he heard them, despite being dragged deep down beneath the stream.

'What's happening? Why do I feel so let down?' Ferone thought to himself. He had no clue of what was happening around him, he felt overwhelmingly discouraged. 'My lungs can not take it... How can I stop my suffering?...'
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Cristallite
Another chapter! :D
~Reading~
That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Dei_Dei
Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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Cristallite
Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
Sliversplashthecat
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Dei_Dei
Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
Cristallite
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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Dei_Dei
I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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Cristallite
Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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on April 20, 2016
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on April 19, 2016
Cristallite
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Dei_Dei
Crimson! You're back ^_^
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Cristallite
Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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on April 20, 2016
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on April 19, 2016
QuackieMackie
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Dei_Dei
Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More▼
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QuackieMackie
YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
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on April 16, 2016
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on April 16, 2016
Dei_Dei
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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QuackieMackie
I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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on April 07, 2016
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on April 06, 2016
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on April 06, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Dei_Dei
Thank you! More coming soon! :p
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Dei_Dei
@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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on April 04, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Yay! ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Dei_Dei
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
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Cristallite
^.^
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on June 22, 2014
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on May 13, 2014
Cristallite
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
Cristallite
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
Dei_Dei
@Crimsonthehedgehog
Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
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on April 29, 2014
Cristallite
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Cristallite
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
Cristallite
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Dei_Dei
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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on April 21, 2014
Cristallite
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More▼
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on April 19, 2014
Cristallite
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Dei_Dei
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
Cristallite
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Dei_Dei
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
ellotherelove
love it
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on April 19, 2014