Dreamer

Dreamer

A 13 year old kid named mark walks through the world of dreams, every night he dreams a continuation to the previous dreams he has had last year he went into a coma for an unknown reason but that time he had the most realistic dream of his life in the dream he got hurt really bad and broke his arm he was fine in real life until he woke up, then he found himself with a broken arm his dreams are so realistic and deep that he can feel everything in real life that he feels in the dream...

published on February 23, 201439 reads 25 readers 3 not completed
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Chapter 2.
The first dream...

The first dream...

So here is how my fist dream went since the spell happened I didn't know anything would actually happen to me because the spell happened in a dream, but it was more real than you think.

"Mark get ready for bed I’ll be there in a minute"  ''ok mom hold on I gotta finish this last homework problem, ok aaaand.... done."   " alright go to bed I don't want you to be tired for church tomorrow."   "ok ok mom goodnight"   "goodnight mark."      "Aaaah my comfy bed already doing its purpose for me alright I should really stop talking to my self its weird."  I close my eyes going into the dream world preparing myself for whats in my dream.
I find myself laying in cross worlds my legs in a dark side and my chest head and arms on a light side. "Uh w-where am I" I cautiously walk to the light side hoping that no life resides in the dark side.  I hear a deep but inviting voice that calls to me and says, "You are in your dreams" "N-no w-way theres n-no way im in my dreams please don't hurt me whoever you are."  "Don't worry im your protector im here to guide you through your dreams I am the light side helping you fight the dark sides of your dreams this is just what you dreamed so I showed up here."  "S-so your a nice guy?" "Yes im like your mentor I give you tips to help you survive in your dreams and if you die in your dream you will die in real life so don't die!"  "Um o-" Rudely interrupting me the voice says, "oh and anything is possible in dreams if you dream you have wings you can fly, only in dreams you are the ruler lets test it dream you have a sword" "ok ill try." I dream that a sword will be in my hands in the next second and it worked. "woah I have a sword now I c-" For the second time the voce interrupts me. " That sword will not appear in your real life only wounds or bruises will appear on you in real life after each dream the spell that the warlock casted on you is unbreakable so dream good things or you will get hurt in real life I’ll see you in your next dream good luck and goodbye!" "no wait!" I open my eyes and find myself back in the real world I would have to live with the spell for the rest of my life.
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MidnightDreamer
nice story! but isn't the I-get-hurt-in-real-life-from-dreams too much like the Dark Forest in Warriors?
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on February 24, 2014
DarkStar
thanks for the support ive been thinking about this story for awhile and I finally decided I should release it :D
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on February 23, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
I like the setting for this story. I'm looking forward to the rest! :D
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on February 23, 2014