I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20143031 reads 96 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 43.

Yay!

Jeff's P.O.V

I woke up, and walked straight to Slendy's office.
"Ah, yes Jeff?" He asked.
"Can you make my room soundproof?" I asked.
"Sure thing." He said, getting up and walking towards my room. He placed a couple of his tentacles on my wall.we tested it, and sure enough it was soundproof.
"Thanks Slendy," I cheered.
"Hey Jeff!" Crystal, said, sitting up.
"Guess what! This room is soundproof!" I yelled.
"Are you serious?" She asked.
"Yes!" I cheered.
"Good. I have some things planed." She smirked, getting up. I blushed. I locked arms with her, and started walking downstairs. We both stopped. We saw.....Liu and Eyeless Jack making out.
"LIU!" I yelled. Liu turned around, his face bright red. He ran out the door. EJ just rushed passed us to his room.
"WHAT THE F*CK!!!" I yelled.
"Jeff, relax." She said, snaking her arms around my waist.
"I should." I calmly said.
"I know it's your brother an all, but he's gonna love who he loves." She said. Kissing my nose.
"Your right. Lemme think this through." I groaned, walking to my room.
"I'm gonna talk to them." She said, walking towards EJ's room.

Eyeless Jack's P.O.V

I sat in my room, holding a butchers knife. I just couldn't help out but kiss him. He was way to cute. I laughed, placing 4 cuts on my left arm, watching the red blood trickle down my grayish skin. I felt tears boiling in my sockets.
"J-Jackie?" I heard a familiar voice asked. I instantly smiled at the "Jackie" part. I fixed my sleeve sow it didn't show the cuts. I open the door, to see Crystal.
"Yes?" I asked, a the tears streamed down my face. Thank goodness I had my mask on. I pulled her in my room, embracing her in a bear hug, wrapping my arms around her fragile body. She looked up at me, and ripped off my mask, and threw it on my bed. She wiped my black tears, with her thumb.
"It's ok." She whispered, stroking my hair. More tears came down.
"No it's not." I cried.
"Trust me. Everything will be okay." She smiled, wiping the tears off me.
"You sure?" I asked.
"Positive. But you just stay here, Kay?" She asked.
"Kay." I rolled up my sleeves, forgetting that I had the cuts on me. She saw, grabbed my wrist, looked at it. A tear fell on my cut.
"Jack. Don't ever do this again. I love you way to much." She said, crying into my chest. I wrapped my arms around her.
"I-I'm s-s-sorry." I whispered.
"You wait here." She said, running out of my room.

Liu's P.O.V

I couldn't help but fall for that kiss. He was just perfect, and a amazing kisser. But Jeff? He's mad at me. I just hate my life. I sat against a tree, crying my eyes out. I hated when Jeff yells at me. I hate it when he's mad at me.
"L-Liu!" I heard some yell, not far behind me. I looked back and it was crystal. She sat down with me. She hugged me, making me feel like someone cares about me. I smiled.
"Don't be sad. She begged.
"But, J-Jeff he's mad at me." I cried on her shoulder. She stroked my hair.
"Let's just go back. I know how you feel, let's just talk and walk." She giggled the last part.
"Sure!" I chuckled, standing up with her. We started talking and walking to the mansion. We reached the door, and I opened it. We walked inside, and Jeff was still in his bedroom.
"LIUUU GET OVER HERE!" We heard Jeff yell.
"I'll catch you later." I said, running upstairs to Jeff's bedroom.

Jeff's P.O.V

"Y-Yes?" He asked, walking in my room. His face was red. I picked him up, spinning around the room.
"MY LITTLE BROTHER IS IN LOVEEEEEEEEEE!!!!" I yelled spinning Around the room faster.
"S-shut  up!" Liu giggled.
"HES INNNNN LOVVEEEE WITHHH JACCKKKKKKK!" I yelled, and stopped spinning, falling on the ground with Liu still in my arms. I didn't realized the door was open so everyone could hear. Jack was poking his head in my door. I walked over, picking Jack up, and spinning him.
"MY BESTTTT FRIENNNNDDDDDD ISSSSSS INNNN LOVE WITHHHHHH MY BROTHERRRRR!" I yelled.
"Shut up!!!" He yelled. I stopped spinning and set EJ down, who tried not to fall but did. Liu ran out of my room with Jack. They walked to Jack's room.

Liu's P.O.V

Jack brung me to his room and put on "I kissed a boy" which I loved that song. He ripped off my sweater, and ripped off his sweater along with his shirt. I took off my shirt. He wrapped a blanket around us. He sat me on hi bed, with the blanket falling off us a little. He started kissing my neck. I got my hand tangled on the back off his head in his hair. I let out a small and quiet moan. He started kissing rougher on that spot, then started making his way up to my lips. He slammed his lips on to mine. He licked my bottom lip, begging for entrance. I let him in, and explored my mouth. I moaned. This continued for hours, until we heard a knock on the door. EJ stopped, slipping on his hoodie, and helping me into my hoodie.
"Come in!" Jack yelled. It was Jeff. His lips formed a smirk.
"Dinners ready." He said in a low, sexy voice. We nodded, and walked downstairs.

Crystal's P.O.V

While we were eating dinner, we heard a knock on the door. Slenderman got up, and unlocked the door. And came running in a guy, that looked like hoodie, but instead of the black and red mask, the background was white instead of the black and had a pink smile, instead of a red frown, and pink eyes instead of red.
"SPRING!" Hoodie yelled, running to Spring and embracing him in a bear hug. (Springs the guy in the picture, that's not hoodie. XD he's a happypasta)
"Who's the girl?" He asked, pointing to me.
"Crystal, Jeff's girlfriend." Hoodie giggled.
"Hia, Crystal! I'm spring! Hoodies brother!" He cheered.
"Hi Spring!" I giggled. Just then , someone else came running in. That looked like Jeff, but with out a cut smile on his cheeks, and eyelids.
"I'm Jeff the hugger!" He said. My Jeff face palmed.
"That's my brother, that's in the happypasta world. Slendy made me be his brother."  Jeff groaned. I giggled.
"So, Jeffrey, who's the girl?" Jeff the hugger asked.
"Crystal, she's my girlfriend." My Jeff said.
"Hi Crystal!" Jeff the hugger hugged me.
"Hi Jeff!" I giggled. Everyone was happy except BEN. Just then, someone else came running in.
"BEN un-Drowned is here!" BEN un drowned yelled.
"Who's this?" BEN un-drowned asked.
"Crystal, my girlfriend." Jeff answered. After everybody was done eating, we went into the living room.

Eyeless Jack 's P.O.V

Me an Liu were still at the table next to each other, eating a cookie.
"Liu, will you go out with me?" I asked.
"Of course I will." He giggled, nuzzling his head in my neck. I smiled, and we walked to the living room, to announce that we were official.
"Uh guys, we are official." I said, holding Liu's arm. Everyone just looked at us, and smiled.
"You really are?" Crystal asked, smirking.
"Yes." I giggled. Everyone cheered, and me and Liu took a seat on the love seat.
"I love you." Liu said, nuzzling his head in my neck.
"I love you too." I said, kissing his forehead.
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Comments (32)

bakugo
CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
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on July 08, 2016
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014