I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20143031 reads 96 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 22.

Dancing

Crystal's P.O.V

Nobody was around, because everyone was in Ben's room watching him and EJ play a game. Jeff was down stairs alone,  watching T.V. I wet into Jeff's Room. I had to practice my dancing, because we have a big concert. I put on I'm in love with a killer on, and danced my moves.

Jeff's P.O.V

I heard "I'm in love with a killer on" and saw crystal dancing with a crop shirt and short shorts. I peeked through the crack of my door. She put on "Gas Pedal" and danced to that.  After that, she put on "don't drop thun thun thun" she danced. She put on "radioactive" she danced. Her last sing she put on "replay" she danced. She was a really good dancer. She stopped and grabbed her water bottle on my desk and drank it.
"I saw you dancing.." I said. She chuckled and kissed me.
"I've been practicing..." She said.
"For what song?" I asked.
"A special song for you...Sexting... By B.O.T.D.F." I just stared.
"I know that dance..." I said.
"You do?" She asked.
"Yes I did it once. Because I was drunk. I'm a easy learner." I said. She put on the song. Sure enough we did the right dance.
"Wow " she said. I just blushed. We did the dance again, and we saw everybody looking through my keyhole or my door crack. We just danced to the song, and ended it. We gave each other a hi-five, then kissed. Everyone just barged right in.
"We saw you dancing." Ben said.
"Shut up, ben." I growled.
"C'mon, you were good.." Everyone said. I kicked them all out and closed the door. Crystal grabbed my hat and put it on my head.
"You look so cute Jeff!" She yelled.
"No I don't." I said back.
"Yes. You do!"
"Why do you love me? How can you love a serial killer?" I asked her.
"Because, I love everything about you. My world is complete with you Jeff. I don't care if your a killer, all I care about if your mine." She said in a voice so soft. She came closer and hugged me.

Crystal's P.O.V

I hugged him so tightly. I loved him so damn much.
"Jeff, why do you keep your hair so long?" I asked.
"Because, I like it that way." He answered. I ran to the bathroom and got scissors.
"Wait..what are you gonna do?" He asked.
"I'm not gonna cut it like that,I'm gonna add layers and fix some places." I sat on his Bed and he sat on the floor in front of me. I snipped and snipped, adding layers and layers. After I was done, Jeff ran to the mirror.
"I look way Better!" He yelled. I got up, and went to the mirror jeff was at. I looked at my self.
"I'm gonna trim my hair too!" I squealed. I ran into the bathroom, and took out the scissors. I added more layers. I heard a vibration on my phone.
ᴅᴀᴅ: ᴍᴏᴍ ɪs sɪᴄᴋ. ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ʏᴏᴜ?

ᴍᴇ: ɪᴍ ᴀᴛ ᴍʏ ɴᴇᴡ ʙᴏʏғʀɪᴇɴs ʜᴏᴜsᴇ. ɪʟʟ ʙᴇ ʀɪɢʜᴛ ᴛʜᴇʀᴇ.

ᴅᴀᴅ: ᴏᴋ, ɪ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜ, ᴄʀʏsᴛᴀʟ.

Oh no.
"Jeff my Mom is sick, I'll meet you in the middle of the woods with the big tree, at 7:00 pm. Bye, I love you." I gave him a kiss on his cheek, and ran into the woods, and found my house. I went inside, and saw mom laying down.
"Mom?" I asked her.
"Sweetheart, I'm not gonna make it, I love you, Crystal." She closed her eyes. I felt her pulse. Nothing.
"Mom! Wake it up!" I yelled. Dad put his hand on my shoulder.
"She's gone..." He said to me. I ran into my room. I texted Jeff.

ᴍᴇ: ᴊᴇғғ, ᴍʏ ᴍᴏᴍ ᴅɪᴇᴅ. ᴍᴇᴇᴛ ᴍᴇ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏᴏᴅs ɪɴ 10 ᴍɪɴᴜᴛᴇs.

ᴊᴇғғ: ɪᴍ sᴏ sᴏʀʀʏ ʙᴀʙᴇ. :'( ɪ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜ. ɪᴍ ᴏɴ ᴍʏ ᴡᴀʏ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏᴏᴅ ɴᴏᴡ.
A couple of minutes later.
ᴊᴇғғ: ɪᴍ ʜᴇʀᴇ ʙᴀʙʏ.

I ran down stairs, said by to my dad and ran into the woods. Jeff was there. He picked me up bridal style and we ran back to the mansion. After I was in the mansion in Jeff's room, he took his hoodie off of him and slipped it on me.
"Crystal," he said.
"W-what?" I asked.
"It's gonna be ok," he said. Jeff hugged me and went out his door.

Jeff's p.o.v

I walked out by room to leave Crystal some alone time. I went into the farthest room which was the dining room and called everybody down.
"What happened?" EJ asked.
"It better be important because I stopped playing video games..." BEN said.
"No, Crystals mom......Died." I gulped.
"Did you kill her?" Jane asked.
"No." I said.
"Ok."
"I wanna go to the store and get Crystal gifts. Jane come with me." I said.
"Fine." She said. I ran upstairs into my room.
"Crystal, I have to get Smile food and get other things. I love you so much." I kissed her, grabbing my blue hoodie and changed into my illusion form. I think I made a pretty good excuse. I hopped into the car and started the car. Jane went Into the passenger seat. We drove to the mall. Jane went into Victoria's Secret to get Crystal some clothes. I went into Hollister and got crystal something's there. Jane came back with 2 full bags from Victoria's Secret. I had 1 full bag. We went to Abercrombie to get her more clothes, and we went to more clothing shops. We went into a gift store, I got Crystal a big stuffed bear, and a bouquet of flowers. Jane went to the shoe place and got Crystal some more shoes.we hit the candy shop getting candy for her. We headed back to the car. We put all our stuff in the trunk and got in. We arrived at the mansion. I texted all the Creepypastas. We have a big Creepypasta group chat, only for the people that live in the mansion.


ᴍᴇ: ʙᴇɴ, ᴅɪsᴛʀᴀᴄᴛ ᴄʀʏsᴛᴀʟ. ɢᴇᴛ ʜᴇʀ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴏғ ᴍʏ ʀᴏᴏᴍ. ʙʀɪɴɢ ʜᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴏᴏᴍ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ sᴜʀᴇ sʜᴇ ᴅᴏᴇsɴᴛ ɢᴏ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ʀᴏᴏᴍ. ᴍᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴊᴀɴᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ɢᴏɴɴᴀ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴜᴘ ᴛʜᴇ ɢɪғᴛs.

ʙᴇɴ: ғɪɴᴇ.

ᴍᴀsᴋʏ: ɪᴍ ᴇᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴄʜᴇᴇsᴇᴄᴀᴋᴇ ʀɪɢʜᴛ ɴᴏᴡ, sᴛᴏᴘ ʙʟᴏᴡɪɴɢ ᴜᴘ ᴍʏ ᴘʜᴏɴᴇ!

ᴍᴇ: ᴍᴀsᴋʏ sᴛғᴜ



ᴇᴊ: :D

ᴛᴏʙʏ: ɪ ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴡᴀғғʟᴇs.

ᴍᴇ: ᴡᴇ ᴋɴᴏᴡ, ᴛᴏʙʏ.  

ʜᴏᴏᴅɪᴇ: ɪ ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴄʜᴇᴇsᴄᴀᴋᴇ ᴛᴏᴏ.

ᴍᴇ: ʜᴏᴏᴅɪᴇ, ᴡᴇ ᴀʟʟ ᴋɴᴏᴡ

ᴍᴇ: ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴊᴏʙs!
Ben brung crystal in his room. Me and Jane grabbed the bags and brung them upstairs. EJ came down the stairs of the porch and went into the trunk and grabbed some bags we all brung the bags into my room took the stuff out. We laid the stuff on my bed. Every Creepypasta was in my room waiting to surprise her. Everyone hid, in my closet, behind my desk, behind the door, and more places. BEN hid in my tv. I ran into Ben's room and grabbed crystal, who sat on the bed crying into my hoodie. I picked her up.
"Close your eyes." I said I carried her into my room. I let her go.
"Open your eyes. She opened her eyes and just froze.
"SURPRSIE!!!" Everyone yelled. I gave Crystal a big hug and kiss. Everyone gave Crystal a hug. Crystal hugged me.
"Jeff, thank you so much." She wanted to check out her new stuff. Every one left the room leaving me and Crystal alone.
"I had to hide the "girl stuff in a bag" I said to her. I handed her the bag which was filled with bras, underwear, bathing suits, and corsets. She looked at all her stuff, all the candy, perfume, jewelry, and other stuff. She came across the big teddy bear, picked it up and hugged it. She dropped it, and ran to me. She wrapped her arms around me.
"Jeff thanks so much. I love you." I wiped her running mascara off her eyes with my thumb. She removed all the stuff and put it in a big bag. She got dressed in her new pajamas, a t-shirt and fuzzie pajama pants. After she got dressed she put my hoodie back on .
"You like that hoodie. Isn't it comfy?" I asked.
"I love this hoodie! It smells like you, so I wear it when your gone, because I miss you. And yes it's very comfy!" She smiled. I picked her up and sat on the couch downstairs. She had her head in my chest. She fell asleep quickly, in my arms.
"Hoodie!" I whispered.
"What?" He said.
"Can you grab My blanket in my room?" I asked .
"Fine." He went upstairs and came down with a black blanket.
"Thanks hoodie." I wrapped me and Crystal in the blanket. I fell asleep, watching "the ring."  About 5:00 a.m I heard crystal scream.
"What he hell?" I asked.
"Number 1,  a scary movie is on, number 2, my back hurts." She said . I turned her around. I stood her up and lifted up her shirt. There was a knife cut, around her right kidney.
"EJ!!" I yelled. He came running down in no shirt, only shorts, and his hair messed up, and his mask in his hand.
"What did you do to me?" She asked.
"Nothing." He said. I lifted up her shirt and showed Jack.
"Ok, I was about to take out her kidney, but I stopped myself. I SWEAR TO GOD I DIDNT TAKE THEM OUT OR EAT THEM." He yelled.
"It's ok, Jack." She said . Jack was sad. He put his mask down, and Crystal kissed him on the cheek.
"Jack, how can you see if you got no eyes?" She asked him.
"I don't know." She looked in his "eyes". Jack sat down on the couch watching the scary movie. Crystal snuggled up in my chest. She resumed her sleeping. While Crystal was asleep me and Jack talked about killing. I kissed Crystal, then fell asleep myself. Jack was on the other side of the couch, still watching the movie.
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Comments (32)

bakugo
CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
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on July 08, 2016
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014