I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20143031 reads 96 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 16.

Uh oh part 1

Crystals P.O.V

I woke up and found Jeff with his head on my belly.
"Jeff.Jeff.....JEFFREY!" I yelled. He jumped a little.
"Your like a pillow." He said. I lifted his head up and got up. Just when I was about to open the door,  Jeff grabbed my waist and swung me over his shoulder.
"Help!!!" Jeff brought me down stairs and put me on the love seat.  
"Everybody! Come in my office!" Slendy yelled. We all were in Slendy's office. Next to slendy, stood a girl with brown hair, jeans and a orange hoodie, and sneakers.
"Who's that?" Ej asked.
"This is Alana." Slenderman said. Alana kept looking at Jeff. Oh no..... My heart raced.
"She is going to be my new messenger." Alana smiled. She kept looking at Jeff. I guess she didn't think I was dating Jeff because she walked over to him and started flirting. Jeff seemed uncomfortable. I couldn't blame him.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~1 week later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Crystal's P.O.V

It's been 3 days since Alana had said something to me. Her message to me was. "Get away from my Jeff. He doesn't love you, B*tch. Besides. Me and him would make the perfect couple. Don't interfere with me and jeff." I thought to myself, oh no, this can't be happening. When I went to Jeff's room, I looked though the door crack. Alana was sitting on his bed next to him. That fag.
"C'mon Jeff." She calmly said.
"No, I have a girlfriend." He said.
"She doesn't have to know about this." She said.
"I said No!" He snapped at her. Before I knew it, Alana smashed her lips against Jeff's. That's all I needed to see. I found Toby and ran to him. I 'shhhed' him and told him to peek through Jeff's bedroom. Jeff was kissing Alana.

Toby's P.O.v

I looked closer.  Alana was holding a pocketknife against a Jeff's back and sliding in across his shirt. Jeff let out a small yelp. How do I tell Crystal this?
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bakugo
CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
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on July 08, 2016
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014