I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20142207 reads 79 readers 33 completed
Chapter 1.

When They met

It was a Saturday. 11:00pm. I was reading fan fictions and looking on my social apps on my iPad. Around 12:30 I heard creeeeeeeeeek sound coming from my window. I saw a boy my age come through my window. He had jet black hair, a bloody white sweatshirt, black skinny jeans and black converse all-star hi-tops. His face, he had a cut smile around his mouth. His eyes, they had a black ring around them. What feared me the most, he had a knife. I didn't scream, because he was kind of cute. Maybe very cute.

"I'm Jeff." He said with a raspy voice.
"No I'm not gonna kill you. Your cute. Why would I do that to a cute girl?" He let out a small chuckle after he said that.
"I-I'm C-Crystal" I said, stuttering.
"Very pretty name," he smiled
"T-thanks"
"You parents home?" He asked
"N-No.... Why?" I again stuttered. What the hell is wrong with me! Stop freaking stuttering!
"Come with me." He stood me up,  let me get changed and get some stuff like pajamas, clothes, my phone and my phone charger, my favorite little teddy bear, a photo of my family, my laptop and iPad, and it's chargers, a blanket and my dog, Winter. She is a husky.
"All set?" He asked.
"Yes" I said after I stuffed all my stuff in a Big bag. He took my hand, and we ran out the window. After about 5 minutes we were in the woods.
"Let me carry that bag for you." He grabbed my bag.
After about 5 more minutes of running. I fell.
"Let me carry you." He picked me up and he could tell I was blushing. I was blushing because he picked me up bridal style!
"Why you blushing" he was blushing too. I felt really shy. A couple of minutes later, we arrived at this big mansion.
" This is Slender Mansion!!" He yelled.
My mouth dropped open.
"Slendy isn't home, but there is Ben, Ticci-Toby, Masky, Hoodie, Sally, Ej, (eyeless Jack), Lj ( laughing Jack) inside. The rest is out on a killing spree, or something else. There's no extra bedrooms, so your gonna have to sleep with either, me, Ej, or Ben."
"You...I guess." I giggled.
"Guys, this is Crystal.Crystal, that's, Sally, Ej, Lj, ticci-Toby, Hoodie, Masky, And Ben."
I met everyone then Jeff brung me up to his room.
"Your room! Is so freaking amazing!" He had a flat screen tv, ps3, Xbox360, and a lot of games. He motion oft me to sit next to him on the bed, so I did.
"Your so amazing, Crystal, everything about you, I know we just met but....."
OH MY FUC**** GOD!!! He kissed me on the cheek!
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Comments (33)

FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08
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on July 08
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014
Napstaton_Neo
No its not. Its a really cool song acually Me and my friend sing it to each other all the time
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on February 18, 2014
Napstaton_Neo
I was expecting to see a parody of the song "Im in love with a Stripper" .-.
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on February 18, 2014