Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 20131475 reads 93 readers 196 completed
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Chapter 4.

History Class...

The only thing I was looking forward to was seeing Lucas in History last period.  It was comforting to know at least one person liked me.

I suffered through lunch, gym and science and study hall until finally, the bell rung.  When I stepped into Mr. Phillips History room, I knew alot of people were staring at me again.  I still didn't know what was so interesting about me.  I took me seat and kept my head down to cover up the red raising to my cheeks.

"Kasey," a voice said.

I looked up, and leaning over me was Lucas.  "Oh, hi," I said... Was it possible he became even more good looking within the few hours I had seen him last?  I swear his blue eyes were shining as he smiled at me.

"Are you okay?"  He asked, his face suddenly serious.

"Yeah, fine," I shrugged.  "Why wouldn't I be?"

He flipped a strand of hair out of his eyes.  "I don't know, you just seemed sad, and kind of lonely," he paused, as if waiting for me to answer, but when I didn't, he started talking again.  "Not meaning you don't look good because you do.  No!  I mean you DO look good, not you don't look good.  I mean you look great, did you do something with your hair?  No?  Am I babbling?"  He asked after he finished.

I was blushing like crazy, I felt like my cheeks were on fire.  He thought I looked good?  This isn't real, is it?  Before I could respond, Mr. Phillips walked in and told us to take our seats.  Once Lucas left, I starting breathing normally again.

"Okay, so we are finishing up our studies about World War II and you know what that means," he gave us a smirk.  "Yeah, fun stuff.  Within the next two weeks, I want you and the partner I assign to you to write a three page paper about a leader in the World War. I will give more specific details right after I list the partners."  He opened his desk drawer and shuffled through some papers.

A whisper went through the classroom, saying how they hated being forced to work with some body.  Inside, I was dying.  This paper meant I had to talk to someone.  Think with them.  Be with them outside of class... I can't do that!  I have to take care of Maria, because God knows our mom sure can't.  Unless my partner wants to come over to my ratty apartment and hang out with my mom who was almost always either drunk or hungover.  Oh, God, what if I was paired up with Kay or May?  Or even worse, Britanny Till, the most popular, prettiest, stuck up, overly-accessorized, diva in the whole school, (possibly the world).  

"Okay," Mr. Phillips started.  "Kay and May, you guys are together," Kay and May smiled at each other.  "Brian and Kevin.  Uhhh, Emma and Julliete.  Britanny and..."

He trailed off, adjusting his glasses.  Everygirl, besides me, who hadn't already been partnered, leaned forward in there seats.  

"Ah, Britanny and Dianna," he said.

There were a bunch of disappointed sighs and groans but I prayed a silent thank you.  

He went through a couple more partnerships then finally he said, "Kasey and... Well darn it," he said as the paper fluttered from his hands to the ground.  

Kasey and who?!  I wanted to scream.  There weren't many people left.  And I swear if I got paired up with Anne, a memeber of Brittany's clique, I was going to just-

"Kasey, you are paired up with Lucas," he continued with the list, but I wasn't listening.  I looked to the seat next to the window, where Lucas was.

He was turned around in his seat, smiling like he just won the lottery.  Then he wiggled his eyebrows and winked, then he started laughing.  I started laughing too.  

Me... and Lucas...Working on a project.... Possibly alone.... I think I liked this.
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youarecool
It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
bluebear0914
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
MysticVolume
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Bmac99
Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
me: *reading -10 minutes later-
parents: get off the computer
me: *keeps reading -10 min. later See More▼
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Bmac99
Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
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on August 24, 2014
Bmac99
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
WinterJo
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Bmac99
Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
Infinity_Wolf
SO GOOD!!
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Bmac99
Thank youuu
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 11, 2014
The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Bmac99
Thanks :-*
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
Avienexjel
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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Bmac99
THANK YOU
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on October 12, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
JeweledOwl812
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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Bmac99
ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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JeweledOwl812
Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
Bmac99
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 11, 2014
ellotherelove
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Bmac99
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
Bmac99
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Bmac99
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Bmac99
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Bmac99
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
Bmac99
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
Bmac99
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
Bmac99
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
Bmac99
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
Bmac99
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
Bmac99
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
Bmac99
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More▼
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on December 10, 2013
Celestine
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
Celestine
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Echo101
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Bmac99
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More▼
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on December 06, 2013
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