Lover Or Murderer? (part 5)

Lover Or Murderer? (part 5)

This story is about a girl named Aron who moved to a new town and doesn't know anyone but her crush/friend Jeffry, but jeff has some things from his past that might not let him.. open up to Aron.

published on July 22, 2013167 reads 53 readers 19 completed
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Chapter 2.

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          "Great job, i'm so proud of you!" Jeff smiled, and hugged me.
        I looked up at him.
          "What now... I can't go home if the police show up." I said worriedly.
     Jeff grabbed the knife from the ground, and licked it clean.
          "Bitter.." He said putting it into his sweater.
          "Come on I have a place were we can lay low for a few days." He said grabbing me and jumping out the window and back into the darkness.
          "Were is it?" I said shakily as he carried me.
          "In an abandoned hospital, where I've stayed for sometime."
          "Ok.."
        We reached the hospital, when we entered it was even worse then the murder scene we had just created, it stank of rotted flesh and blood.
       Blood was also splattered all over the walls, some of it even spelled out words.
          "What happened here?!" I asked blankly.
          "It's my art... don't you like it?...Some of it is even mine." He said happily.
          "Would you mind adding some of yours?" He licked my cheek, were the wounds were.
          "Umm... I don't know.."
          "Please.." He said puppy eyed.
          "How much do you need?" I  asked shocked, that I gave in.
          "As much as you can give." He handed me the knife.
          "It's only a little blood .. you'll be fine!" I kept telling myself.
      But in reality I wasn't so sure.
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
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on March 16, 2016
awesomenessqueen66
THIS STORY IS AWESOME YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER I HAVE EVER HEARD FROM OHMIGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on February 23, 2016
sparklygirlforever
why... why would she kill the girl??? :(( good story btw
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on July 14, 2015
J.Killa
:( man!... Why did it end...it was awesome.
You r really great making this story though. I enjoyed everything so far.. I wanna know whats next I can't wait for more.
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on November 06, 2014
EverymanHABIT
I have to finish it tonight...Its like 1:00 am and Im still reading!
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on February 13, 2014
Mawwy
okay :(
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on July 28, 2013
Mary_chan
blech im sorry! ive been really busy but next wednesday i promise ill have it ready!
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on July 28, 2013
Mawwy
where is more???
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on July 28, 2013
Mary_chan
chill of course im making more :D
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on July 24, 2013
Rainbow_Bird
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!! OH PLEASE MOOORRREEE!!!
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on July 24, 2013
Mary_chan
Dude if u dont like it dont read it
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on July 23, 2013
Reploid_Zero
Ah! Why am I reading this anyway? Sheesh, You sure know how to mess with my mind. Don't scare me like that.
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on July 23, 2013
Mary_chan
Thankyou very much!
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on July 23, 2013
RozenChara111
Best story I've ever read! I can't wait to see the end! :D
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on July 23, 2013
Mary_chan
you guys actually like it?! :D
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J.Killa
LOVED IT ALL!! OF COURSE IT'S THE BEST ^_^
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on November 06, 2014
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on July 22, 2013
Icekiller46
MURDURER!!
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
awweeeessooome!! More more more more moooooorrreee!!
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
awweeeessooome!! More more more more moooooorrreee!!
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on July 22, 2013