Lover Or Murderer? (part 5)

Lover Or Murderer? (part 5)

This story is about a girl named Aron who moved to a new town and doesn't know anyone but her crush/friend Jeffry, but jeff has some things from his past that might not let him.. open up to Aron.

published on July 22, 2013131 reads 40 readers 19 completed
Chapter 1.

The Surprise~

    I walked down the stairs to see my "surprise".
         Jeffry grabbed my hand and giggled.
      "I'm so happy I have someone to help me now!"
      "Help you... With what..?" I asked curiously.
      "just wait." he said bringing me outside in the darkness, until I could a dim light, which was coming from a lit porch.
        I didn't know what to think at the time...
      He brought me to the window that was also dimly lit.
      "here take this." He handed me a knife.
      "W-why are you giving me this?"
      "Look through the window.' he said peering through it as well.
   In the room I could see the girl that I saw at school, who had warned me about Jeffry.
       I was shocked.
      "Jeff why are we here?"
      "Since she's been pestering me for a few weeks now, and your here, I figured it would be perfect if me and you killed her together."
      "Kill her... with me?!" I said very scared.
      "Yeah won't it be fun?" he said opening the window, and gesturing me to go in.
    I didn't say anything.. and more than that  how could I, when I loved him so much?
     He gave me a boost onto the window, and I helped him up as well.
    He told me the plan which was..
        He was going to be holding the girl down, and I was to be.. killing her.
       This was terrible! But what else could I do? There was no way I could have escaped  from Jeff if I refused I would likely be killed also.. I had to do this.
      He came to the girl and held her tight, in position, as he gestured for me.
      I was so scared I cried, as I lifted the knife high above my head.
        After what seemed like an eternity, the girl woke to the sight of the knife in my grasp about to end her life.
       Her faint screams were covered by Jeff's hands,
      "Hurry Aron!" he whispered.
     I swung down the knife full speed into her stomach.
      "Jab jab jab" went the knife as I went.
       After at least 30 bloody stabs to the stomach and 1 to the heart, she was long passed dead.
      Blood was everywhere including all over me and Jeff.
     I whipped off my face, and dropped the knife.
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ACupOfTaeTwoSugaCubesAndAKookie
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on March 16
awesomenessqueen66
THIS STORY IS AWESOME YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER I HAVE EVER HEARD FROM OHMIGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on February 23
sparklygirlforever
why... why would she kill the girl??? good story btw
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on July 14, 2015
J.Killa
man!... Why did it end...it was awesome.
You r really great making this story though. I enjoyed everything so far.. I wanna know whats next I can't wait for more.
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on November 06, 2014
EverymanHABIT
I have to finish it tonight...Its like 1:00 am and Im still reading!
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on February 13, 2014
Mawwy
okay
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on July 28, 2013
Mary_chan
blech im sorry! ive been really busy but next wednesday i promise ill have it ready!
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on July 28, 2013
Mawwy
where is more???
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on July 28, 2013
Mary_chan
chill of course im making more
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on July 24, 2013
Rainbow_Bird
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!! OH PLEASE MOOORRREEE!!!
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on July 24, 2013
Mary_chan
Dude if u dont like it dont read it
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on July 23, 2013
Reploid_Zero
Ah! Why am I reading this anyway? Sheesh, You sure know how to mess with my mind. Don't scare me like that.
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on July 23, 2013
Mary_chan
Thankyou very much!
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on July 23, 2013
RozenChara111
Best story I've ever read! I can't wait to see the end!
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on July 23, 2013
Mary_chan
you guys actually like it?!
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J.Killa
LOVED IT ALL!! OF COURSE IT'S THE BEST ^_^
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on November 06, 2014
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on July 22, 2013
Icekiller46
MURDURER!!
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
awweeeessooome!! More more more more moooooorrreee!!
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
awweeeessooome!! More more more more moooooorrreee!!
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on July 22, 2013