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This is a short story about what would have happened if Draco Malfoy and Hermoine Granger had got together.

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Chapter 4.

Trouble-Hermione

Once I got off the train, things got A LOT WORSE.  I hurried through the village, but the footsteps behing me cgrew louder and faster until a cold strong hand grabbed me by the shoulder and swung me round to face the stern, stubbled face of Viktor Krum. "Hello gorgeous," he said.

"Viktor, what the hell are you-" I started to say, but I was rudely interrupted by Viktor pulling me against him, and pressing his lips onto mine. I tried to pull away,disgusted, but he snaked his hands into my hair and stuck his tongue down my throat. This just got worse and worse (him sticking his hands down my jeans and pressing me against the wall, groaning)until suddenly there was a loud BANG!! Viktor fell to the floor and there, smiling down at me, was Draco, holding a metal-covered broomstick in his hand. I rushed to him and hugged him hard. "How did you find me??" I asked, astonished. Draco sighed. "I took the bus from home because Dad was shouting at me (I'll tell you later) and I heard Viktor muttering to himself that he was gonna kill you for not telling him you were a mudblood, and then I saw him trying to kiss you when you didn't want him to- I  just got so angry that I ended up knocking him out with this. I love you, Hermione Granger." I smiled up at him. "I love you too." Draco smiled, and swept me into his arms, where we properly kissed. I wanted it to go a little bit further though, so we went back to my houe to finish what we started. When it was about time for my parents to come home, Draco was starting to head off. I waved him away, and then turned on the TV and flopped onto the sofa. I was then shocked to find a cold bony hand on my shoulder, pulling me upwards. I tried to scream, but the hand had me tight around the throat.

"Oh, hey Hermione!!" Viktor Krum said. "You didn't tell me you had a boyfriend." His fist collided with my stomach, and I fell to the floor, unconsious. But before i did, however, I managed to scream out, "DRACO!!"
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killedbythesketchbook
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on November 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Aw thankyou :3
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on November 14, 2013
peace_out
You have got to write more I mean seriously I don't know why you haven't written more yet you have a true talent!!!!!! Xxx
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on November 12, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks :) Also I'm not really sure about the name...you'd have to give me more information about the plot
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on August 22, 2013
blank
P.S. love this book!
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on August 14, 2013
blank
Hey since my email that connects to Qfeast never stays connected. I just want to asked you if I make a book about Mason what shoild it be called?
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on August 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
#shadowbolt332: I could, but I don't have any fresh ideas just yet.

Maybe you have some...?
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on July 23, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Um okay :)
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on July 21, 2013
vintagebird
OMG!!! I love this story!!! You HAVE to write more!!!!!
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on July 20, 2013
vintagebird
OOPS! Sorry! I see you've already addressed that issue in the comments! Forgive me
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on July 20, 2013
vintagebird
Just saying, you wrote "dementor" instead of "death eater"
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on July 20, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Um well I could but I've kind of run out of ideas- plz help :)
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on July 19, 2013
PowerOfThree
Could you add more?
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on July 19, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Guys on the 3rd chapter it says "Dementor"- it was meant to say Death Eater- sorry :3
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on May 15, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Please can someone comment on this?? It's quite lonely and epressing on my own TT.TT
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on May 13, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Sorry about the "houe" typo- it was meant to be "house"!! Soz :3
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on May 11, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks for commenting this was my 1st story :)
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on May 11, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks to everyone who commented and/or favourited this story. It's my first one and I wanted to make an effort :)
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on April 29, 2013
GONETOOLATE
Mind blown. 0.o
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on April 29, 2013
blank
I really like this story!
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on April 29, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
:P Yep... He likes collecting Movies of all sorts. :D
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Oh poor you :'(

But I'm glad you've seen the films :3
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
O_O Oh. I-uh. Don't have 'em. But my dad has all the movies. :P
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Aaw thanks :3 But.........

READ THE BOOKS NOW!!!!!!!!!
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
I've never read Harry Potter but that. was. EPIC!! XD
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks Clove!!! :D Thanks guys :3
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on April 27, 2013
Clove
Nice twist
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on April 27, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
I love draco he's my favorite character from the harry potter series =D
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on April 27, 2013