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This is a short story about what would have happened if Draco Malfoy and Hermoine Granger had got together.

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Chapter 3.

Trouble-Draco

Only a few hours later it seemed, me and Hermione were heading home from the last day of the term(and-hurray!-last day of exams).
The train journey would have been tiresome and irritating, if not for Hermione. We talked about ourselves all the way home, always finding out things that we'd never known about each other. Every time I said something to her, her eyes shone and her whole face lit up like a chinese lantern. We held hands for the whole trip, only occasionally stopping as Harry or Ron glanced our way. They obviously knew what had happened, because they kept whispering to each other and glaring in our direction. Finally Hermione got fed up with this, and went over to talk to them in private. I looked up at her, confused. She smiled softly and squeezed my hand. "Back in a second" she said. However, even right at the end of the journey, at my stop, Hermione didn't come back or even look at me! I wondered miserably if she was having doubts. After all, we were in different houses and differnt races- Father might not have approved of Muggle and Wizard relationships.


When I got back home, Mother hugged me, but her eyes looked worried and her hands were shaking by her sides as we walked into the living room. I sat down on a chair in front of Father. Mother signalled for Dobby, our house-elf, to leave the room. He stayed by the door, but we were all too tired and depressed,as we always were, to care right now. Father coughed. "Draco!" Father said. I ignored him. "Draco! When youv'e STOPPED looking at our ignorant little house-rodent will you please listen to me!!" I istantly turned my attention to him. He sighed. "I recieved some interesting owl-post from Proffessor Snape today stating that you have been having frankly distusting relations with mud-bloods- Miss Hermione Granger, to be precise. Is this correct?" His eyes penetrated me like a burning hot iron. I turned away from him, slightly ashamed. Father stood up form his chair, fuming. "I ASKED YOU IF THAT WAS CORRECT?!!"  he yelled. I heard Dobby run away from the doorway at the other end of the room. I stood up too, and walked over to Father. I had just had enough of him telling me what to do- trying to make little clones of himself. "Oh, why does it matter to you?!" I yelled. "Can't you see that I'm just trying to be happy?" I asked. "Dementors don't need to feel happy..." Father rumbled. "Get a grip, Dad!" I yelled. "I've always told you, over and over again that I don't want to be a stupid Dementor, but you and Mum never listen!!
" I strolled towards Father so I was right in his face, and shouted, "I DON'T WANT TO BE YOU, OK?! I NEVER HAVE AND I NEVER WILL BE!!! I LOVE HERMIONE AND SHE LOVES ME, SO WHY DOES ANYTHING ELSE MATTER?!" I screamed. Mother rose up from her chair too. "Oh, for goodness' sake, she's just a stupid mudblood..." Mum growled. "SHE IS NOT A MUDBLOOD!!DON'T YOU DARE CALL HER THAT!!!" I glared at Mum. "Draco..." Mother said quietly. She walked up to me and tried to take me into her arms. "LEAVE ME ALONE!!!" I screeched, and stormed up into my bedroom, where I spent the rest of the afternoon.
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killedbythesketchbook
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on November 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Aw thankyou :3
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on November 14, 2013
peace_out
You have got to write more I mean seriously I don't know why you haven't written more yet you have a true talent!!!!!! Xxx
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on November 12, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks :) Also I'm not really sure about the name...you'd have to give me more information about the plot
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on August 22, 2013
blank
P.S. love this book!
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on August 14, 2013
blank
Hey since my email that connects to Qfeast never stays connected. I just want to asked you if I make a book about Mason what shoild it be called?
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on August 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
#shadowbolt332: I could, but I don't have any fresh ideas just yet.

Maybe you have some...?
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on July 23, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Um okay :)
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on July 21, 2013
vintagebird
OMG!!! I love this story!!! You HAVE to write more!!!!!
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on July 20, 2013
vintagebird
OOPS! Sorry! I see you've already addressed that issue in the comments! Forgive me
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on July 20, 2013
vintagebird
Just saying, you wrote "dementor" instead of "death eater"
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on July 20, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Um well I could but I've kind of run out of ideas- plz help :)
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on July 19, 2013
PowerOfThree
Could you add more?
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on July 19, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Guys on the 3rd chapter it says "Dementor"- it was meant to say Death Eater- sorry :3
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on May 15, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Please can someone comment on this?? It's quite lonely and epressing on my own TT.TT
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on May 13, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Sorry about the "houe" typo- it was meant to be "house"!! Soz :3
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on May 11, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks for commenting this was my 1st story :)
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on May 11, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks to everyone who commented and/or favourited this story. It's my first one and I wanted to make an effort :)
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on April 29, 2013
GONETOOLATE
Mind blown. 0.o
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on April 29, 2013
blank
I really like this story!
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on April 29, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
:P Yep... He likes collecting Movies of all sorts. :D
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Oh poor you :'(

But I'm glad you've seen the films :3
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
O_O Oh. I-uh. Don't have 'em. But my dad has all the movies. :P
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Aaw thanks :3 But.........

READ THE BOOKS NOW!!!!!!!!!
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
I've never read Harry Potter but that. was. EPIC!! XD
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks Clove!!! :D Thanks guys :3
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on April 27, 2013
Clove
Nice twist
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on April 27, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
I love draco he's my favorite character from the harry potter series =D
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on April 27, 2013