The Red Snow

The Red Snow

Once there was a town in the middle of know where. In thi town on the sixth day of the sixth month for six weeks the fountain in town square would turn on. That was when it was believed the nightmare came out to hunt. Kami, is five when she first moves here and is bullied, but when she befriends Jake, they pull pranks on her enemy's. Ten years later though, it all goes bad when her previous bullies end up missing or found horribly disfigured. Read to learn more.

published on November 12, 2012119 reads 37 readers 20 not completed
Chapter 1.

The beggining

CHAPTER 1 THE BEGENING




The little girl walked down the cold street with a wagon full of books. She had other things too like snacks and apple juice but her favorite item in the wagon was the books. She had fantasies and historical books about Cleopatra and many more. Her favorite though where the scary books. You see when your a five year old girl with no friends and a not so caring family. You like to read the things that bring you happiness, and horror filed in the void. I'm not saying she's a weirdo or anything just... She enjoys reding about that type of stuff. Lately her favorite books where that of Steven Kings.

The little girl had dirty blond hair very pale skin. She had little rosy cheeks and bright blue eyes that gazed into your soul. Maybe that was why she was disliked. All she knew was that nobody liked her. She was unwanted. Sometimes when the other children's parents saw her she reminded them of a lost puppy who was scared of your hand. At this moment she was wearing winter clothes, but when she got home she would strip down into something more comfy.

Suddenly little children poked there head out of a pile of fluffy ice pointing and giggling. The little girl ignored them continuing on her way home.

" look at her clothes" one squeaked
" it's not that cold out" another replied giggling.

They are obviously insane the girl thought continuing on down the path.
She had on a thick jacket and another sweater underneath it. She had on a rainbow scarf and also some gloves and a beanie to keep her brain warm. She didn't want it to freeze and she become stupid like the other children.

Soon the children took stones and covered it with the white powder called snow and through it at the lonely girl.
She cringed but continued to walk.

"Hey why don't you do something about us if you don't like it weirdo!" Some boys yelled picking up more of the hidden daggers and throwing it at the defenseless child.

The girl chose that moment to make a run for it. The children followed. They giggled and cheered.
They found the scared girls reactions to them very amusing. They made turns and continued to follow the helpless girl. They ran and ran. The faster she ran, the faster they ran. She didn't even care at this moment that she left a wagon full of goodies at one of the mean kids houses. She ran into the woods and the children perused her still. She stumbled apron a cabin and ran inside. Looking out the window she saw the other children backed away in fear.
" well, looks like Goldie locks is a goner" they laughed leaving the site.

The little girl took a gasp of air and tried to catch her breath. She felt her heart hammering in her chest.
When she knew they where gone for sure she crouched under the window and began to cry. She cried and cried until she had nothing left to cry about. Just then she heard footsteps and looked up. A shadow appeared near a set of stairs. When the figure took one last step closer to her she realized he was a boy around her age. He looked about eight and had silky black hair and was very tall and skinny for a child. His eyes where a beautiful emerald green and his pale skin was almost paler then the girls. His eyes may have been pretty but they where also the eyes of a monster.

" who are you?" He asked. If looks could kill. She would of died seconds ago.

He took a few more steps closer to her and crouched down next to her. He began to pat her head very gently.
" why where you crying just now?"
" n-no I wasn't crying" she replied wiping the tears off of her face.
" your such a liar. You just wiped away some tears" he whispered leaning in close to her.
" are you hurt? Tell me why your crying"
" we'll...... Some kids in down where chasing me and throwing stones at me... They covered them in the snow so the adults couldn't see."

" oh " was all he said before picking her up and caring her to the nearest couch. When he sat her down he said " you should stand up for yourself"

" I know" she sniffled sitting down in his lap.

" we should pull a prank on the," he whispered, voice lighting up with excitement.

" like what?" She asked whipping her frozen nose on her sleeve.

" you'll see..... By the way, what's your name?"

" Kami.... You?"

"Jake"
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EyelessIngrid
:O. So Creepy
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on April 15, 2015
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Anyways, umm in suggest re reading my story I re wrote the whole thing and am now starting over. Anyways I finished all the chapters showing now so @Beaster4life56 you should re read it and sorry for not updating soon
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on April 29, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Hey guys! Thanks so much for reading my story, right now I'm editing it and re writing some chapters. Once that's finished I'll continue it for sure. Thanks for reading my little children of the night :3
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on April 25, 2014
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
plz write more!
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on April 17, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
i read the first chapter and i already think this story is awesome. (:
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on April 16, 2013
emeraldstone
hello love its me i love it
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on April 15, 2013
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
you spelled my name wrong -_-
but yes i do love you
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on April 07, 2013
XXXkittycobainXXX
Casandra!!!!...i guess this is why you kill for ME cause you love me??
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on April 07, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Cool but whatch your spelling. =]
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on March 05, 2013
mikycamry
hes obviously in love with her to kill over her
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
i love the bloody romance there but unseen
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on March 04, 2013
mikycamry
adorable
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on March 04, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love it. Please write more soon!
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on February 11, 2013
twilightfan
Want more. Please write more
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on February 07, 2013
traslia
Woa creepy but awesome!
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on December 13, 2012
leprechuan24
omg!! i ador it!!! you should get it published...really published!!
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on December 11, 2012
midnightshine8
cool wait no great wait no INCREDIBLE
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on December 06, 2012
SnowThaProduct
Amazing
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on December 05, 2012
Mythsandlegends
so cool again!
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on November 22, 2012
Runaway
Scary! I like it but could you do some spell checking?? Great Story
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on November 16, 2012