Poem to Alice

Poem to Alice

Hey Alice this is for you. Losing Bella awakened me, and not for the best... well the best for me. So enjoy this verbel ass kicken

published on April 15, 201339 reads 24 readers 13 completed

Alice

Alice this is for you,
And i hope it makes you say boo hoo.
You treated me like shit,
You could really use a mint.
The entire time you were here,
Bullies were in fear.
Then you up and left,
And commited theft.
You took my friend away,
Well here is what i have to say.
You are a bitch,
I hope you die in a ditch.
You think you are first class,
Well you can kiss my ass.
You wanted me to fight,
Well ill fight all night.
Because i know,
That you are colder than snow.
You think youre a good cooker,
But we know you're an alien hooker.
You are a very cheep one,
For i would rather look at the sun.
You tried to break me,
You only helped me.
You are darker than a cloud,
This is making my best friend proud.
This may be the end now,
But you are a fat cow.
You need your ass beat,
You are nastier than an old mans feet.
Ive been awakened from my "wimp state"
Now to hit you with a twist of fate.
I can live with out you,
This is true.
You think you are top dog,
No, you're just a fat hog.
There is nothing you can say or do,
Because i dont care about you.
You are fatter than a hut,
And are a major slut.
Go ahead and beat me down,
You're uglier than pennywise the clown.
So go ahead and get mad,
Because i am no longer sad.
My true best friend wont leave,
That i know and can believe.
So Goodbye,
I will never cry
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Comments (13)

klovecutie03
I HATE ALICE101 SHE MAKES FUN OF EVERYONE SO ALICE IF YOU READ THIS.... GO DIE IN HELL FOR ALL I CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 05, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
i dont care if there are cuss words in here i agree with u about everything u said about Alice101 she makes fun of everyone and i just have to say this is awesome and u are awesome to say things like that
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on May 10, 2013
fleur22045
I heared about what Alice did, and how she took Bella way, I hope you heal from the hurt, I have been betrayed, by a bestfriend, who semt to like me for 5 years, and then, just when I needed her, she turned her back on me, I think this poem is a good way to say what you feel, without starting a new fire
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on May 09, 2013
fleur22045
I think you pored all your feelings out now : D
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on May 09, 2013
MiaTizz
I am 10, and I don't think words like this should be used in a poem.....
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on April 30, 2013
Beauty784
I agree with everyone who commented.
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on April 17, 2013
catesonskates
Alice is gonna be so ticked!
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on April 16, 2013
evvvie_s
Neat poem, keep goin'
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on April 16, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
I totally agree You go, that must of felt good, as Clove said
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on April 16, 2013
Nobody.07
I think on this one, too, you went too far. I think that for the benefit of younger users of Qfeast you should refrain from certain words. But I did love the poem :3 regardless, as I am older to understand.
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on April 16, 2013
Clove
Well said! Wow, that must have felt so good...
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on April 15, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
I agree wow
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on April 15, 2013
Little.Blue
I must say, this is a great way to get revenge on someone. Cool poem
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on April 15, 2013