Insanity (1)

Insanity (1)

This is my shot at making a creepypasta. Tell me if you enjoyed ^_^" "It's not my fault..."

published on July 27, 201561 reads 16 readers 35 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Not Her Fault

Fancie's P.O.V

I remember her.

I was the first friend she had.

Who she told all her secrets to.

Who she opened up to.

Who told me everything.

I knew it wouldn't be long until she snapped...but...I didn't expect like this.

I look up at the trees in the moonlight and sigh.

I became her friend in first grade. I was very jealous of her name.

'Scarlet Rose Smith. Beautiful.'

She was always bullied and at home...she took the blame for everything that happened.

She would come crying to me...only me.

I'm a year older than she is so she feels like my little sister.

Then...she moved.

We kept in contact for a while, but I'm not one for long distance things.

So when she had texted me...I had to tell her the truth.

I told her that she would always be the best friend I would remember, and I found a new best friend...but she would always be the first.

I never heard from her after that.

Until I saw on the news a murderer on the loose.

I could recognize the handwriting on the wall that they had shown, written in blood.

'It's not my fault...hmm...sounds like her...'

It was her...she snapped into something that won't ever go away.

'I wonder if she'll ever find me...I suppose I was too harsh when I had told her that I couldn't have a long distance friendship with her...'

Just as I was turning to look at my window, I saw her.

Scissors in one hand, glowing red eyes, her hair matted in blood, her body scrawny, scars all across her neck, her breathing is erratic and sharp, she has an evil malicious smile across her face, and her walk...too terrifying to describe.

I reach for my phone while keeping my eyes locked on her, but I saw her sprint to my front door.

'Did...did I lock the door?!'

I took my chances and ran with a baseball bat at hand, but I was met face to face with her.

"S-Scarlet...wha-...what happened to you," I said trembling in fear.

She chuckled darkly, "you know exactly."

I gasped at hearing her...she didn't have the voice that sounded like bells anymore...she sounded dark and husky.

She started laughing a bit more, "what's the bat for huh? Why don't you get your other friend to help you out?"

I started feeling bad, regretting what I had done to her.

"Scarlet...please...I'm sorry," I said scared down to my bones.

"It's not my fault," she said glaring at me, "you deserve to die."

She lunged at me at a surprising speed, quick enough to not let me able to block her.

I felt dizzy as my heartbeat had went up then dropped way down as blood went down my chest.

She had stabbed me at my vocal cords...even if I survived her...I could never speak again.

She then had a twisted smile as she pulled the scissors back and started cutting on my flesh as if it were paper.

I tried to scream but nothing came out, I tried to breathe but blood was blocking my airway, after a few minutes I fainted from the pain.

I then knew...

I wouldn't wake up again.
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Comments (35)

Iluvcookies
THIS STORY IS JUST TOO FRAKING GOOD! THE SUSPENCE THO
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Iluvcookies
Omg, AWESOME! NEW CHAPTERS WOO
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Silent_Scarlet
XD yus!! I've taken advantage of my writers block being gone for a while so ive been coming up with more ideas :3 i hope you enjoy them!! :3
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on August 22, 2015
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on August 22, 2015
Iluvcookies
Yay! Chapter 6 is out!!! But I always got that feeling that man could be Jeff... Idk Lol
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Silent_Scarlet
XD awesome!! Thank you!! X3 hmmmmm *sits in thinking beanbag staring at a lava lamp* hmmmmmm...
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on August 14, 2015
Iluvcookies
I would probably spend those 300 dollars on gaming stuff but Idk, And I would LOVE to help you with ideas! *Puts on thinking helmet* I'll tell ya once I get some ideas!
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on August 14, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD i was just thinking about who that guy can be...it's like having $300 to yourself and wondering what you can do with it first X) perhaps you could assist me in some ideas? Ill be sure to give you some credit for helping out if ya do :3
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on August 13, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
X3 awwww thank you!!! I've had writers block on what to write so far and it has been nagging at me XD (oh and chapter 10...ermahgerd... perfection!!!! X3)
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on August 12, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD yeah, thank you for the patience!! I've been thinking of all the possible routes I can take with this story X3 hehe
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on August 12, 2015
Iluvcookies
OMG OMG YAYAYAYA ITS OUT CH 5 IS OUT
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on August 04, 2015
Stardancer
This is awesome.
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Silent_Scarlet
Thank you!! I'm so happy it was enjoyable!! I've another story almost like this if you'd be interested (Eyes of the Shadows) ^_^ thank you for reading!! :3
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Stardancer
Your welcome :)
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on July 29, 2015
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on July 29, 2015
AquaNoodles
I love this! I'm not much of a HUGE Creepypasta fan much anymore, but I still enjoy the stories :)
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Silent_Scarlet
X) my top favorite is Jeff... *blushes lightl* hes...really cool ^///^
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AquaNoodles
>:3
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
>XD fear the crazy!!! *flails arms weakly*
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XD*
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
HehehehehEHEHHEHEHEHEHE XF
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
X3 oh Jeff, i drew your beauty and you took the picture...meh not fair Jeff!! ...youre still cool though X3
Oh my >X3 haha
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XD JEFF YA A WIMP
Also on this pic; my month is Yandere >:33 <insane chuckling>
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
*Deep breath in then out* laughing jack is the only cool clown...Jeff can kill the others >:3 oh and i put up my drawings of everyone's (so far) Jeff ran away though so I'll have to draw him again XD
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XDD <paps> shush XD Clam child.. Connect with UR inner clam XD
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
>XD exactly!!! The one clown that doesn't phase me is supposed to be scary but if i see a friendly (o.o not so friendly) im gonna have a panic attack and maybe hit the clown if possible and then pass out XD why brain?! Why!?!?! XD
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XDD LEIK- IM FINE; I JUST HAVE A PHOBIA AND I DON'T LIKE CLOWNS; YET I LOVE LAUGHING JACK WHICH IS ANOTHER CLOWN! :D
Like- WAT
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD i know right? It even surprised my mom XD it's just something about those bright colors that get me is my guess...thats why i avoid people in real life, i feel threatened by them o.o but it's pretty weird huh XD
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XD That's messed up XD (not u, the weird thing with L.J and other clowns XD) and yea! ~(•3•)~
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
They're both awesome X3 for some reason...i can look at laughing Jack and not have a problem...but if i see one of those original clowns i will cry and shake and i will get violent soon after a few minutes of crying o.o but sure, I'll put some of my drawings in my photo thingy on my profile in a moment :3 (oh yeah, i also drew Doctor Smiley X3 )
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
Also, may I see some? :3
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
O yea I forgot I also love the Jacks XD
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
Me too ^_^ ive been drawing them X3 so far I've drawn BEN, Jeff, Slenderman, Clockwork, Sally, Ticci Toby, Eyeless Jack, and Laughing Jack :3
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
Same! But I also love the brothers, Sally, Clockwork, BEN, Toby, Smile Dog and many more
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
@MustacheMasterBoss I'm so glad you enjoy this!! :D it makes me so happy this story is so far off to a good start ^_^
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AquaNoodles
No problem! I've kinda miss having to love the pastas and fangirling over them ;) seb- aww the memories
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