Insanity (1)

Insanity (1)

This is my shot at making a creepypasta. Tell me if you enjoyed ^_^" "It's not my fault..."

published on July 27, 201555 reads 13 readers 42 not completed
Chapter 1.

Day's End

She was normal...once.

Before she went crazy.

No, not crazy...insane.

I wonder what she sees when someone bleeds.

I wonder what she hears when someone cries.

I wonder what she feels when she kills.

I've seen lots of news articles on her, but they can never catch her.

She was normal...once.

Before they bullied her.

Before she went insane.

Her name was Scarlet, but she's forgotten now.

They say when she kills you can hear her humming and scraping the walls with her weapon.

She has no weapon of her own...she takes what she sees in your home.

This information was given to me by someone who had seen her murder, they recognized her anywhere.

You know she's there when you see red glowing eyes, scars all along her neck, and humming as she kills.

I wonder what she sees when someone bleeds.

I wonder what she hears when someone cries.

I wonder what she feels when she kills.

I wonder if the next victim will be me.

As I lie in bed and wonder anxiously, I then I hear something I didn't want to hear.

I hear scrambling in my kitchen and it's 3:47 in the morning.

I wonder if it's my mother up late at night, but I then hear something that gives me a fright.

I hear humming and metal scraping against the walls.

My breathing quivers as I try to pretend I'm asleep, but then I slowly weep.

'I've got a future ahead of me...and now I've got to go...no I don't have to, I can fight back.'

I reach for my pocket knife my dad gave to me, I switch the blade and pretend to sleep.

I hear humming in my room, when I look up I looked up too soon.

Her blood red eyes stare back at me, I try to say something or even scream.

"You didn't help me," she said deeply, "you watched as I bled."

I could hear a growl and an insane chuckle.

I sprang up and held out my knife, unphased she kept coming to me.

"Kill me if you'd like...I've already tried," she said turning her head to the side, "maybe it might work if you succeed...but I'll warn you, you will bleed."

I shakily held my knife, I must be the first person she had to fight.

I could see the scars on her neck in the moonlight of my window.

"It's very hard fighting the instinct that tells you to survive," she said stumbling my way, "but why even bother if you don't care you're alive?"

I started feeling depressed with every word she'd say.

"You've seen me long enough," she said with a malicious smile across her face, "goodbye, I won't meet you where I go."

With that she stabbed me into my chest, I felt dizzy and couldn't move at all.

The one I had pity for has now hurt me.

She stabbed again mercilessly.

I felt pain but mostly fear.

My vision became black and white and soon I fell down.

'What did I do to deserve this now?'

Now I felt nothing and everything went black.

I let out my final breath while hearing her laugh and whisper.

"It's not my fault," she said as her footsteps descended into the darkness of my hallway.
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Comments (42)

Iluvcookies
THIS STORY IS JUST TOO FRAKING GOOD! THE SUSPENCE THO
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Iluvcookies
Omg, AWESOME! NEW CHAPTERS WOO
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Silent_Scarlet
XD yus!! I've taken advantage of my writers block being gone for a while so ive been coming up with more ideas :3 i hope you enjoy them!! :3
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on August 22, 2015
Iluvcookies
Yay! Chapter 6 is out!!! But I always got that feeling that man could be Jeff... Idk Lol
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Silent_Scarlet
XD awesome!! Thank you!! X3 hmmmmm *sits in thinking beanbag staring at a lava lamp* hmmmmmm...
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on August 14, 2015
Iluvcookies
I would probably spend those 300 dollars on gaming stuff but Idk, And I would LOVE to help you with ideas! *Puts on thinking helmet* I'll tell ya once I get some ideas!
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on August 14, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD i was just thinking about who that guy can be...it's like having $300 to yourself and wondering what you can do with it first X) perhaps you could assist me in some ideas? Ill be sure to give you some credit for helping out if ya do :3
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on August 13, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
X3 awwww thank you!!! I've had writers block on what to write so far and it has been nagging at me XD (oh and chapter 10...ermahgerd... perfection!!!! X3)
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on August 12, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD yeah, thank you for the patience!! I've been thinking of all the possible routes I can take with this story X3 hehe
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on August 12, 2015
Iluvcookies
OMG OMG YAYAYAYA ITS OUT CH 5 IS OUT
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on August 04, 2015
Stardancer
This is awesome.
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Silent_Scarlet
Thank you!! I'm so happy it was enjoyable!! I've another story almost like this if you'd be interested (Eyes of the Shadows) ^_^ thank you for reading!! :3
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Stardancer
Your welcome
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on July 29, 2015
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on July 29, 2015
Dauntless_Demigod
wow that was good
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Silent_Scarlet
Thank you so much!!! ⌒_⌒im glad you enjoyed this!!
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Dauntless_Demigod
that will work
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on July 28, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
Hmm...hit the guy with the nearest shampoo bottle and run XD
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on July 28, 2015
Dauntless_Demigod
um yeah i don't have shower curtains i have the kind that closes but is not a curtain and i don't have a razor
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on July 28, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
Oh same here!! Keep your eyes on the mirror at all times, keep the shower curtain back but if you're taking a shower and the killer pulls back the curtain (like a PERV) do your best/worst model cover up to confuse the killer then get a razor and run with a towel and clothes so you can run and dress...that's always my plan for showers XD
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on July 28, 2015
Dauntless_Demigod
no prob i like reading horror stories but i don't realize how much it scared me until i go to the bathroom alone
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Live_love_and_eat_food
I love this! I'm not much of a HUGE Creepypasta fan much anymore, but I still enjoy the stories
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Silent_Scarlet
X) my top favorite is Jeff... *blushes lightl* hes...really cool ^///^
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
>XD fear the crazy!!! *flails arms weakly*
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on July 27, 2015
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
HehehehehEHEHHEHEHEHEHE XF
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
X3 oh Jeff, i drew your beauty and you took the picture...meh not fair Jeff!! ...youre still cool though X3
Oh my >X3 haha
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
XD JEFF YA A WIMP
Also on this pic; my month is Yandere >:33 <insane chuckling>
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
*Deep breath in then out* laughing jack is the only cool clown...Jeff can kill the others >:3 oh and i put up my drawings of everyone's (so far) Jeff ran away though so I'll have to draw him again XD
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
XDD <paps> shush XD Clam child.. Connect with UR inner clam XD
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
>XD exactly!!! The one clown that doesn't phase me is supposed to be scary but if i see a friendly (o.o not so friendly) im gonna have a panic attack and maybe hit the clown if possible and then pass out XD why brain?! Why!?!?! XD
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
XDD LEIK- IM FINE; I JUST HAVE A PHOBIA AND I DON'T LIKE CLOWNS; YET I LOVE LAUGHING JACK WHICH IS ANOTHER CLOWN!
Like- WAT
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD i know right? It even surprised my mom XD it's just something about those bright colors that get me is my guess...thats why i avoid people in real life, i feel threatened by them o.o but it's pretty weird huh XD
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
XD That's messed up XD (not u, the weird thing with L.J and other clowns XD) and yea! ~(•3&bull~
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
They're both awesome X3 for some reason...i can look at laughing Jack and not have a problem...but if i see one of those original clowns i will cry and shake and i will get violent soon after a few minutes of crying o.o but sure, I'll put some of my drawings in my photo thingy on my profile in a moment :3 (oh yeah, i also drew Doctor Smiley X3 )
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
Also, may I see some? :3
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
O yea I forgot I also love the Jacks XD
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
Me too ^_^ ive been drawing them X3 so far I've drawn BEN, Jeff, Slenderman, Clockwork, Sally, Ticci Toby, Eyeless Jack, and Laughing Jack :3
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on July 27, 2015
Live_love_and_eat_food
Same! But I also love the brothers, Sally, Clockwork, BEN, Toby, Smile Dog and many more
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
@MustacheMasterBoss I'm so glad you enjoy this!! it makes me so happy this story is so far off to a good start ^_^
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Live_love_and_eat_food
No problem! I've kinda miss having to love the pastas and fangirling over them seb- aww the memories
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