Loved You
I loved you.You loved me too.
You said you'd love me forever.
Isn't that clever?
When you left,
You made a huge cleft
In my heart.
-Mary Anne Payne
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I'm a Poet
I really enjoy writing poems, it helps me think. I've written quite a few poems, and will continue to write them. If you like poetry, you'll enjoy this book.
show story details+You loved me too.
You said you'd love me forever.
Isn't that clever?
When you left,
You made a huge cleft
In my heart.
-Mary Anne Payne
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Comments (3)
TrashCow
These are clever. Poetry is a very creative way of writing that I believe deserves more appreciation.
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on September 06, 2017
SlugcatSeagullAghase
I really like this. I think you should try other forms of poetry instrad of just couplets. Maybe try free verse or lyric, for it helps with expression.
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on September 05, 2017
Glitterlucky9
Wow.you have waaaaaaay more creativity than I do! Please make more!!!!:-)
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on November 09, 2016