I'm a Poet

I really enjoy writing poems, it helps me think. I've written quite a few poems, and will continue to write them. If you like poetry, you'll enjoy this book.

published on November 26, 201518 reads 6 readers 11 not completed
Chapter 1.

Love

Love,

It's like a crazy dove.

I love you,

You love me too.

That's how it goes.

Kinda like when it snows.

Love can be cold.

It can seem like mold.

It can be good too,

As long as they have you.

-Mary Anne Payne
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Glitterlucky9
Wow.you have waaaaaaay more creativity than I do! Please make more!!!!:-)
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neefflove
Some of these are really good! Poetry is hard in my opinion, great job.
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TurtleLover96
Thanks! I can be good at poetry sometimes. It all just depends how I'm feeling at the time.
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TurtleLover96
Yeah. That's a pretty good one. I like either the suicide poems or "It Howled Through the Night."
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on November 26, 2015
neefflove
Probably the war inside him
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on November 26, 2015
TurtleLover96
What would you say is your favorite poem? @neefflove
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on November 26, 2015
neefflove
No probelm! And again, really good poems!
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on November 26, 2015
TurtleLover96
Thanks for the advice. A lot of these I wrote quite awhile ago (at least six months). Also, in school we spent at least three weeks learning all the different types of poetry. Thanks!
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on November 26, 2015
neefflove
There are sometimes in your poems where it seems like your making a word fit into a line just because it rhymes with the previous line, I don't know if that's what your doing it not, but if the word doesn't really fit with the poem it's a little distracting. Poetry doesn't always have to rhyme. You should learn about the diffrent types of poetry, it could really See More▼
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on November 26, 2015
TurtleLover96
I don't mind. I'd love it. @neefflove
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on November 26, 2015
neefflove
Do you mind if i give you q little constructive tip?
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