Why am I here?!

Grandma's visit part 1

It's November 21st and I am currently waiting for Danell outside a store...And she's late. Then I hear a scream.
        "I'm SORRY!!!" Danell screams as she runs to me. She has her long hair in a braid and a blue hair clip, with a nice outfit. "O.K, lets go!" She took my hand and burst into GameStop. How does she have this much energy. There was a grandma asking the employees about someone that was here. Then Danell took my hand and hid behind me.
        "What? Are you O.K?" I asked then she shushed me and we stayed like that until the grandma left. "Explain please." I need to know.
        "Fine. That's my grandma." What's wrong with that. I'd do a lot of stuff to see my grandma. (Lives in France)
        "So?"
        "She wants me to go back to Japan. If she sees me she'll convince my parents to let me go." Well, she could just talk to her grandma and work it out. I bet her grandma is just lonely.        "Anyway, we came here for games and we're getting some." She pulls me places until we each get three games. We had some time left so we went different places and tried different things. It was a day full of fun, sadly time was running out and I had to go home.
        "Bye." Then we take our separate ways.

Suddenly I greeted by a paper in my face.
        "What do you want bro?" Annoyed by his action. Is he trying to suck me in a drawing?! He pulls the paper away from me, thank you. Then I see a happy kid. Then after a few seconds I realized that is my brother.
        "I passed because of you!!" He starts hugging me, then I see the grade. "A...It's an A!!" I start to hug him back. After that...we watch some T.V and go to sleep. We plan to have a feast tomorrow.
                                (Danell POV)
        "Mother, I don't want to." No...Not after I made a friend and started fitting in. "Why? I doing fine here!"
        "There is a person who wants you to join his band in Japan. This will get you started on a job!"
        "I don't want a job! I want to stay with Kaitly!" I rush to my room and start to call Kaitly. Her phone is off, that's right. She's sleeping at this hour. I'll tell her tomorrow. How will she react?