When Time Stops

When Time Stops

Well here it is guys! Please tell me if you like it or not! i'm kind of new at this whole writing thing...So yea please read and Review!

published on March 06, 201554 reads 19 readers 19 not completed
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Chapter 3.
Where-No, when are we?

Where-No, when are we?

A/N: Hi!! I’m glad you guys like my story!! It makes me happy :3!! Sorry about not finishing this chapter till now....I have had a really bad case of writer’s bloke. Also sorry about it being very small. The pic is of the throne room that there are in!! So on to the story!!

(Third person P.O.V)

(Last time in When Time Stops: “We can’t just let him go to the past like that! What if he rules the world? Or worse destroys it? We have to follow him into the portal to make sure that he doesn’t mess up our future!” everyone yells “Yea!” Then Maya says “then let’s go!” and jumps into the portal and the others followed her……..)
Maya opens her eyes and grabs her head “owww…..” she sits up and looks around “wow…” she saw a beautiful Throne room that was made of glass and gold. She gets up and looks at her clothing. She was wearing a white Chiton and a brown shawl. The she sees Demitri passed out on the floor and runs over to him. “Demitri! Wake up!” She yells at him. He wakes up, sits up, and looks around “where are we?” He asks. “I have an idea of where we are” says Maya. “Where?” He asks. “Ancient Greece….” “What?!” “Well….Eggman did go to some random time…..and we did followed him” “True.....but how do you know it is Greece?” “Have you not seen what we are wearing?” then he looks down at himself and see that he is wearing a sea-green toga. “Oh” he says “yea” says Maya. Then Maya looks at something that was laying next to him and gasps. “What?” he asks as he looks at it also. “I-is that a Trident?” Maya asks. He looks at it “I guess it is” he says. Then Maya looks all excited “what?” He asks. “I know who you are!” She says. “well duh” “No! Who you are in greek mythology” “Who am I then?” “Poseidon”

A/N: Again sorry about it being so small.....I have writers bloke
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foilflingza
UPDATE
RIGHT NOWWWWWWS
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ThatRandomGirl33
I'LL TRY
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on May 26, 2015
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on May 26, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Ho damn this is awesome!
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ThatRandomGirl33
Thanks!
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on March 19, 2015
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Awesome!!!
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ThatRandomGirl33
Thanks!
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on March 18, 2015
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Jeweled_Feather
Stop it with the suspense and cliffhangers!! O.O
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ThatRandomGirl33
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on March 18, 2015
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Weiss_Schnee
Damn you, I DON'T WANNA BE LEFT IN SUSPENSE!!!
(Now I know how you guys feel when reading my stories XD)
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ThatRandomGirl33
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on March 06, 2015
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Love the suspense!
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ThatRandomGirl33
: D
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ThatRandomGirl33
I have started on it!
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Can't wait to that next chap!
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Paraboilc
There is a typing error in "the dream" part it says I instead of it
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ThatRandomGirl33
?
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ThatRandomGirl33
Thanks! I didn't see it
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on March 06, 2015
Paraboilc
Right before they show each other what they can do in the dream
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Weiss_Schnee
I'm willing to bet they're Zeus and Hera. It makes sense since they're dating, Zeus is the King of Olympus, and Hera is Queen of Olympus.
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on March 06, 2015